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    The joke is far too true Sylpher comments loner-kid's Avatar
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    Sylpher comments

    As I seem to have far too much free time right now i'll be writing a little story. It wont be that great cos i'm basically making it up on the spot but there's a general theme and plot that i'm aiming for so it wont be completely random. Still this is a thread for you to post opinions, and suggestions if you really feel like it (Although i kinda doubt that'll happen). there's no rules about what you can and can't say here, just don't spam the thread with your opinion (even if it's praise it's still annoying).


    Read some of my stuff here
    http://thefinalfantasy.net/forum...-snippets.html

    The Gargoyle
    SPOILER!!:

    The gargoyle sits, solemnly, alone
    That silent man of stone
    Here, for his deeds he must atone

    Beaten eyes stare blankly
    Withered arms curved and wrinkly
    Bat-like wings spread fully

    For once he was a man deceitful
    His soul decored in black so hateful
    From his despair grew pain most vengeful

    With his death he was deserted
    Left condemned and desecrated
    Bound to form most understated

    And now he is but a statue made of stone
    Sitting all alone

    Star Gaze
    SPOILER!!:
    High in the sky, blinking down on us
    We all watch the stars
    Believing, as we do
    That friends and lovers long since moved away are staring upwards too
    Remembering us as we remember them
    Smiling in the light of an unatainable star
    And even if the star was snuffed out at that very moment
    We would never know
    We just keep smiling
    And believe the star is true

    My TFF Family
    (is laughably small because 'loner' turned out to be fairly accurate)
    Unknown-Entity - loner-kid's hilarious 'friend'
    Raider - my ginger brother

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    Registered User Sylpher comments Diyala's Avatar
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    Then what are you waiting for mate?
    post it here now
    I really like reading stories and novels but you intend to post a short story right ?
    I vote for your coming one
    do your best
    and enjoy creating your story since i really find myself in writing
    coz it's the only way to express every little thing that might be annoying me being inside my little heart
    I can feel better by writing

    Good day
    Last edited by Diyala; 10-21-2009 at 12:35 PM.

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    The joke is far too true Sylpher comments loner-kid's Avatar
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    well i did start it, see the 'slypher' thread, but it had to go on a bit of a hiatus because of various reasons although i am getting back into writing it right now so we'll see when i post up the next bit


    Read some of my stuff here
    http://thefinalfantasy.net/forum...-snippets.html

    The Gargoyle
    SPOILER!!:

    The gargoyle sits, solemnly, alone
    That silent man of stone
    Here, for his deeds he must atone

    Beaten eyes stare blankly
    Withered arms curved and wrinkly
    Bat-like wings spread fully

    For once he was a man deceitful
    His soul decored in black so hateful
    From his despair grew pain most vengeful

    With his death he was deserted
    Left condemned and desecrated
    Bound to form most understated

    And now he is but a statue made of stone
    Sitting all alone

    Star Gaze
    SPOILER!!:
    High in the sky, blinking down on us
    We all watch the stars
    Believing, as we do
    That friends and lovers long since moved away are staring upwards too
    Remembering us as we remember them
    Smiling in the light of an unatainable star
    And even if the star was snuffed out at that very moment
    We would never know
    We just keep smiling
    And believe the star is true

    My TFF Family
    (is laughably small because 'loner' turned out to be fairly accurate)
    Unknown-Entity - loner-kid's hilarious 'friend'
    Raider - my ginger brother

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