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  1. 07-07-2008, 04:24 AM #1
    Itachi Uchiha
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    Loveless - Comments

    As stated in the thread for the story itself, I'd like all comments (if any) to be posted in here. That was the chapters are more fluent and not broken down by other posts. Any opinion whether good or bad, praise or on improvements. Anything about it that you want to say, please do so in here.
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    Foolish Brother. If you want to kill me, then blame me. Hate me. And live on in shame. Run and run. Cling desperately to life.
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    I've been told to advertise this forum. So just hurry up and join since we need members.

    My family so far- My heartless sister: al bhed psycho, My other seymour loving sister: superjj, My Anime Chasing Little Brother: Kawaii chaser, My kickass older brother: geordanuk, My Cat loving older brother: Wizardcat My blood sucking, vampire nephew: bangaathief, My crazy younger sister: Firefly, My other, not so easily slain son: Darkwolf, My easily slain illegitimate son: Wyatt Arkham, My third and very sporty son: zell_dincht0808, My very demented uncle who you've just got to love: Mariko, My evil grandfather who needs a good kicking: Hannya, My level 99 grandson with a blood soaked lance: Dragoon Nick, Official play thing of: Kyo-san

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  2. 07-07-2008, 08:56 AM #2
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    Wow. So far, it seems like the story is brill, and the way you've written it is amazing. You couldn't have worded it any better.

    I can't find any faults so far, and it was written beautifully. Well done Can't wait for you to continue it.
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