Elyon Seraphim
Lord Deity of Harmony

...Seriously, does he have some premonition or something? He shouldn't know about Dimitri's evil, yet.

So.... he basically grew up delivering letters and learning how to weild three types of weapons. All the while, Dimitri became his "friend" while still being his rival. Four years later, he started adventuring, wokring with some kind of thievery group for awhile, and after that, his story begins?

Good attributes.

So... Elyon's an alchemist?

Does he know about a future event that's going to be disasterous?

He may acquire some, though?

Well... I guess you kinda already did with attitude and treatment of others. In fact, ignore this one.

Indiana Jones? So, when the world's problems become more apparent, he... wants to go to new ones? He doesn't want to help Chaosthroph?

Okay, Elyon. I've decided I can't make the characters how I want them. Instead, I'm letting everyone else choose how they want them represented. I've already discussed this with Meigumi, and she's forming her character now.

I would like to ask you the same. What I want is this:

Your character's basic backstory
Your character's current lifestyle and attitude
Your character's treatment of others
Your character's view of the world
Your character's potential conflicts
Your character's, well... character
Finally, your character's motivations

I'm asking the same of everyone else. We'll get through this together.

There's always placeholders... we won't laugh. Much.

Elyon, man, when I look at the title, I think there's a single city of importance in this mystical world called Chaosthroph. Why's it so special? What did it do to become so legendary? That's what I wanna know going in. Instead, playing through the game, the PLANET is called Chaosthroph, and by the end of the game, merges with a second world to become Concord. So... the title loses all purpose.

But it says "city," meaning one, which is a contradiction.

OMG

I just realized. The game's title is "Chaosthroph: The Legendary City." Um... but Chaosthroph is a planet... and there's no secret hidden/overly important city on either Chaosthroph, Orderos, or Concord...

...Uh-oh...

Aw man, that ain't good. D: You sure you don't got a WordPad or anything? Firefox also does that... I think you should get a change soon. :/ Not to worry about files, they're all in the group and with me.

No red line? Nothing at all? e___e Computers aren't supposed to be stupid....Do you even have spell-checker? And what web browser are you using...?

You spelled "weird" wrong. Sheez, is it really on? You should see a red line under that word.....

Also, "choices" is spelled wrong.... Uhm, is spell-checker on? >_>;

By the way, you spelled "cocoa" wrong. Use WordPad or something to make sure you're spelling the words right. xD

Either will suffice. That took me by surprise and I consumed 20 Grand Elixirs during the fight, so having to do it again? No thanks!

I guess... (Even though anybody who's seen it before will know what to expect, and besides, its just text. There's no real visuals.)

Well... I suppose we could, but I'm thinking about overall usefulness... But, it is your game, you should choose.

How about taking away control from the player? Prevent that from happening. (Oh yeah, and have slightly faster text, please.)

By the way, faces are quite limited right now, so I'll throw in special faces with more emotion after I finish the two.