Well, we all have to start somewhere. However, before you began your battle you should have read the Newcomer Advice thread first which lays out the basic rules for RPBs. These aren't the same as chat battles and it states directly in the rules that two-line posts are not allowed.

If you would like to learn how to do TFF style RPBs I am also willing to help you out. I've done a few in my day and I can help show you how the real thing works. I'd even set up a demo battle if you feel you'd want one since it can be difficult to learn by example when there aren't many around anymore.

~DragonHeart~