I don't really have any criticisms for you. I thought they were wonderful, and you should continue posting whenever one comes to you. Good job!
I don't really have any criticisms for you. I thought they were wonderful, and you should continue posting whenever one comes to you. Good job!
Aww, thank you kindly
One thing i would like to work on is trying to make the lines rhyme. Just need to expand my vocabulary a bit xD
Spoiler: My TFF Family:
My TFF girlfriend who hearts root beer - Chocobo_Lover 17
My brother of honourable justice - Judge Magistrate
My Canadian sister who travels the skies- R.Kyra
My nameless brother of legend - Hero without a Name
My brother, the Gunblade master - Lion Heart
My supernatural sister of mysterious intrigue - belleZ
Rhyming isn't as important as the message that is trying to be put across. Some of my favorite works didn't rhyme, and they were no less amazing for it either. You shouldn't hold back because of something like that, but instead just keep writing as it comes to you. The poems are really good.
Naww, thank you kindly
It's always good to be reassured of these things. Well at least my message is being conveyed appropriately xD
Spoiler: My TFF Family:
My TFF girlfriend who hearts root beer - Chocobo_Lover 17
My brother of honourable justice - Judge Magistrate
My Canadian sister who travels the skies- R.Kyra
My nameless brother of legend - Hero without a Name
My brother, the Gunblade master - Lion Heart
My supernatural sister of mysterious intrigue - belleZ
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