Okay, so I have been scrolling through the Literature Forums pages and I have noticed a lot of poetry threads. So I am thinking we should just make a big poetry thread so everyone can post there lovely pieces of work in one thread so we don't have a million threads floating around. And people will be able to comment of them as well and post their own so they don't have to make another thread. (I swear I just repeated myself... =__=) Anyway, plus if this could get turned into a Sticky thread it would never go away!

Now I am just putting this idea out, and I will start it off by putting up one of mine. This one is an older one of mine.

Your Feel
By: Devon L. Kay

Whenever I see you
my soul takes flight.
Whenever I hear you
my heart is in the light.

You look so beautiful
your wonderful hair,
your sweet smile,
your deep brown eyes, so rich, so pure.

I don't know how to approch you,
I wouldn't know what to say.
You look at me, and I look away.

I wonder what you feel like,
skin so soft, so warm.
I wonder if you would kiss me,
lips so cool, so loving.

If only you knew,
how I feel about you.
If only I knew,
a little more about you.

I can't stop staring,
I wonder if you will notice.
I will notice you,
Now just need to talk to you.

I will talk to you soon,
just that be known.
I hope you like me too,
and if you do,



I will smile.

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Although I did over use "I" in this one.