Hiya! I thought i could post a few of my poems here... please tell me what you think of them!

I can take constuctive critism, by the way, so don't feel you have to be really nice, lol!

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I was frozen in time,
But now i feel as if my time is just beginning.
I look at you and want you to be mine,
Although, i don’t appear to be winning.

You make me feel great,
And even more, you make me feel wanted.
I know i haven’t always been a great mate,
But you are all i’ve ever needed...

So, i’m sorry the things i say,
Aren’t always what you want to hear.
But please, please make me pay!
I don’t want the end to be this near...