Writers Academy (Previously Demonia)

[Victoria]

Nice judging, Aerif, however...

A loss of 1 point just cause of text color? =P I didn't know text color had anything to do with writing. XD; Although you have a point.

And the post flow... well, it's not PM's fault that Red wasn't very good. =\
And Red didn't even really have an attack... he just powered up a DBZ aura of flame. o_O

But anyway, other than that, it's pretty good.

I was somewhat stuck on what to do with DH's darkness, even though it wouldn't have lasted very long. I wanted to come up with a new technique, but no such luck on what to do. Perhaps I should have used a different character, or come up with techniques beforehand, who knows. All in all, it's really my responsibility that our fight didn't have many posts.