Interesting read, I admire your passion on the subject.
Here are my opinions on some things that are written in your essay.
*A minor irritation on my part, but when you said something about "bettering themselves on the genre", I thought you meant you were going to actually talk about different tips and tactics for each game, and found that misleading. one of those IMO things I guess.
*Keep the information balanced. Less that two paragraphs for the Street Fighter series while four paragraphs for the KOF/SNK series is a little biased. Suggestion: Remedy this by talking about the history of the SF series, like you did with SNK.
*Keep thoughts organized. It's cool to talk about the striker mechanics and the special gameplay for each KoF game, but it needs to be done in a timely manner (and balanced for SF material as well).
*Stay consistant. I like how you divide the games between 2d and 3d, I would of done the same thing if I wrote the topic at hand as well. One thing I'd like to see is you covering the everything that you did in the 2d as well as in the 3d section though. I'd go through a rough draft, brainstorm a few things you'd like to cover, find info for those ideas, see if it is relatable to the subject, clean it up and keep the same format for the other section. It will be a much more effective for knowledge when the reader sees it in an organized manner.
Those are a few things I could think of at the top of my head. If you have questions or would like me to help you edit or anything like that, feel free to send me a pm. Cheers!
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