If you think the mental battle is a mess then it is only because I did not appreciate Lucid *attempting* to indirectly control my character, i.e. what my character *actually* saw/perceived, and where my character *actually* was.

What makes it worse is that he completely ignored the abilities of the mask my character wears. And if you had properly noted I did actually conform, for the sake of overall flow, to Lucid’s “reality” during the end. The rest of my post was more explanation and clarification from Nin’s perspective. I don’t think that the two of us were a particularly good match up, but oh well.

For the record, bear in mind this is my first RPB battle so please don’t expect me to become an expert on how things are *meant* to be in the course of a few weeks. But that doesn’t mean I’m not willing to try. I’m open to suggestion/opinion.