My FF movie parody

[fknnhostile]

Hey guys, I'm new to this forum but I wanted to show you guys my movie I made for my final. Its an action/comedy based on the game which I spent a lot of time working on. Hope you guys enjoy it and tell me what you guys think!
YouTube - ‪Leawood Fantasy(Final Fantasy Parody)&#x202crlm;

[Tallulah]

I watched it yesterday; doesn't really stand out, just like all the other Final Fantasy 'Real Life' parodies. However, I would like to see further episodes, if there are any in the pipeline, to see how the storyline pans out.

It's hard to edit on software within a limited timescale, with limited capabilities. I have done so in the past as a Media student myself. Because of unreliable people within the group our final piece fell a bit flat, but I can see you've had lots of help and support with your additional actors and crew. The sound editing (music, sound effects during battle) were spot on. I bet it was easier having the soundtrack already mmade for you, so you didn't have to worry too much about sound engineering

One other criticism: the text boxes could have been proofread before being rendered and finalised, and made a bit more consistent. The size of the font differed quite a bit which I found a little off-putting. :/

All in all, quite good. I've been reading a lot of film magazines lately so I'll give it a star rating.: 3/5 ***

[Rowan]

"let me repay you"
*gets on knees near crotch*
"heres this sword!"

thats some excellent scripting right there , bahaha.
I really enjoyed it, I can see you put a lot of effort into making it. What I would like to see if you were to make more, is a new structure with your own original made costumes and some character personality and development and make a series of episodes.

Good work