Quote Originally Posted by Celtic
There was once a monstrous rat,
who was ever so fat.
He ate some cheese,
then had to sneeze,
then was eaten by a cat.
This one made me sad... poor little rat.

You have some talent in your longer lyrics, however, it's all pretty basic. Whilst you have some really good and not often used stuff, I bet you could make somekind of career out of creating lyrics for emotive or nu-metal pain inspired bands. Whilst those genres are a little cliche, they're very popular, and your lyrics would probably speak to a lot of people.

All in all, nice.