Oh yeah baby, this is a war!!

What the hell is that celtic !!! You are doing a great job, I think you are spending hours and hours try to make your lyrics good

I liked the lyrics and specially this section:

This battle is no one's war,
just a bunch of thugs and poor.
There's no just cause it seems,
just a bunch of - broken dreams.

and this:

Getting whacked in the head,
blood flashes red.
Bat spins out,
causes me to shout,
shouldn't be like this,
dodging death's kiss.
It used to bring me down,
Now it's - that dark part of me.

You have my vote. Keep going !