ATTN: Detor

Sadly, I hate to state this... I don't want to sound rude or anything, but how your controlling your character is a little, well, 'too much'. You're making him use his chakra in ways that are very unusual, and doing it quite a bit. Most Genin ranked ninja don't even know how to focus there chakra throughout there body yet, and yet Detor seems to be doing it as if he were an advanced Chounin or so... I don't know if it's just me or what, or if I sound too harsh, but I just wanted to get that off my chest... XD

... Ah. Damn that feels better.

Vivi

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