Reply With Quotethanks for answering my questions!!!!! also, where in time are we??? just wondering, is it durring the show or a few years after or somthing...? good luck with writing the story cant wait
Lord Storm Bryce, The profile is perfect I am glad you explained why he was at a much higher age the the rest too. I was thinking that I was going to ask you to change it but you explained it perfectly. Your profile is accepted I just need to take a look at your jutsu first to make sure its not uber lol. But your profile is diffently accepted.
Sieg people wont play as the instructors too much, just referencing them here and there. And if they must be played they would be played by me or Leathal. But if you do graduate and make it to a chunin then maybe we can see. Lol thats still off al ittle but im glad people are throwing out ideas. Keep the ideas flowing.
As for a more detailed instructor play I just want to try keeping the god-modding down and playing as our "primary" instructors would be doing that... And sinse I made this thread I know that god-modding would diffently be bad so I have an incentive not to do it, That goes for Lethal as well. But if you just want to reference them like having them speak or something like that, that is completely ok with me. Just try not to fight with them or have them save you in every situation especially once people start becoming on the "evil" side lol I just want basically everything fighting related discused in here before it happens. That way everyone can aggree on a outcome.
Other then that, I am currently working on the first post and it should be up late tonight or tomarrow. Hope you can wait that long !! I know I can't and I am the one writing it !! lol Have a great remainder of day/night, wherever you may live
thanks for answering my questions!!!!! also, where in time are we??? just wondering, is it durring the show or a few years after or somthing...? good luck with writing the story cant wait
The time of the show is really not an issue lol because we are going to have our own fate with these characters. As mentioned before orichamaru actually betrays kohana. But in this rp he may very well not do that or maybe might do it again who knows lol. Some characters might still be alive even though they die in the series and some might just stay dead. This rp will be very original so I am trying to keep away from the show as much as possible. I just wanted a naruto feel when I made this rp so thats exactly what it is. Characters from the show are in this rp but dont have a "set" role. Just because they did something in the show doesnt mean they are going to do it in this rp. We will decided what they do and dont do lol basically.
Ok I am almost finished with the post and this is the last reminder to let me know if you do not wish for me to mention anyhting about your character. If nothing is said that what i will do is just name a brief history and personality (atleast what my character can interperate) into my first post. The post is underway !! Just be a little bit more patient i should have the post completed within the hour. And I will be checking to see if someone doesn't want something revealed. So please do let me know. Sieg on the other hand i do ahve you as a friend in my post because well we are partners lol and i know just a little bit about you not too much though.
Ok hope i answered all the questions ^-^ Now!! Back to the writing of the post.
One more thing Remember that I can always edit the first post, if you do not like something just let me know and I can quickly change it. But let me know in here first before you post that way i can discuss atleast my side of why i did that. But if you couldnt remind me in time that you didnt want something revealed then i will quickly chage it... Thank you
Is it too late to join?
Name: Mikoto Tsuki
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Village: Hidden Leaf Village
Appearance: She has short black hair that comes to the middle of her ears at its longest point, dull hazel eyes that always seem unfocused due to their color, stands roughly 4'9", has average weight, and has a slender build. Her face is smooth but pale.
She wears a mid-thigh length white kimono with slits in the sides for easy movement and black netting underneath, a black waist band, sturdy black boots that tie up to mid-shin, and she keeps her head band tied around her thigh. On her right thigh, she has a bag in which she keeps her kunai.
Personality: She's quiet in large groups, but she opens up when she's with a smaller circle of people. She loves to read and train with her father, but he rarely has time to teach her anything as he always seems to be out on missions. Most sunny afternoons will find her working on martial arts by herself or trying to increase the power of her main jutsu. The only thing that really gets on her nerves is when someone yells at her for not paying attention. She's always focused, but her dull eyes make it seem otherwise. It's quite a pet peeve.
Jutsu: Tokkan - Mikoto does a series of 5 hand signs and increases her already above average speed by half a step. She's still a beginner, though, and doesn't always get it right. Others in her clan can increase their speeds by as much as 4 steps, but it will probably take her years to get to that point.
History: Mikoto was born into the Tsuki clan. Their claim to fame was getting one's body to move to a certain internal rhythm and use it to increase their already incredible speed. It seemed that her father was always on missions, so Mikoto's training was often put on hold, putting her significantly behind the other young people in her clan.
When she was ten, she had failed an exam because she had spent time with her father instead of studying. (It was one of his rare nights home.) The other young ones of the clan cornered her and began harassing her about "shaming the family." They quickly became bored with yelling and started using the Tokkan jutsu to "knock some sense into her." She tried using it to defend herself and get away, but due to her lack of training, she was outmatched. Ever since, she has trained nearly every day, whether by herself or with her father. She still hasn't caught up to the rest of the clan, though.
Image link: http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c2...iMitoko001.jpg
Last edited by Kimmy37; 10-20-2006 at 07:24 PM.
Kimmy37 love your jutsu it is diffently uniqu just like your diffently in. I guess I never said this before yet but this is as good as any time to say it. It will never be to late to join there are always ways to enter a rp, they take more time to think of a way but it can be done. Your profile is perfect though not to powerful either. The rough history is a bit unclear but im sure it will be cleared up later on when your character starts to open up to other people as well.
If you dont mind I will add you also in the biggining of the post and reference you with just basic personality and a very brief history in the opening post. Please tell me as soon as possible if you dont want me too ^-^ But welcome aboard the RP should start very soon... we still have only one "team" and now 5 people without a "team" so get together and discus ^-^ i will asign groups if necessary just for the sake of guiding the rp a little along but other then that ^-^ have fun with this rp !! and enjoy!
Yes!!!! one more and we have a full third team!!!! this is gonna be good
Ok I will be posting soon and remember everyone try to atleast post something once a week. I will understand if you cant on certain weeks but one post shouldnt be two hard ^-^. Also I recommend atleast coming up with two paragraphs 5 to how many sentences you want in each paragraph. I know this rule might seem a little harsh but it challenges the mind to actually come up with something exciting to read. I know everyone wants to make this rp go go go go but remember let other people who havent posted get a chance to say there two cents in as well. Because I've noticed that in some cases people are left out because rp's just move along way to fast.
And for the last rule, just have fun. I really hope this RP flourishes into something great and i know we can acheive this with the rules that I have made ^-^ especially the last one to have fun.
Excellent, excellent. I'm so excited.
Great profiles guys, I look forward to going in there alongside all of you.
I won't be posting in the actual RP until later tonight, as I have some things I have to do (gotta make some cash for the weekend). But later this evening it's going down.
Also, just a reminder, if the five of you who are unassigned want to form into squads go ahead and post that here, along with who your Instructor is going to be.
Great, great, I'm ecstatic.
I'd like to be in a three man team with Asuma as the leader, but I don't know who would like to join me. ^^;;
dont be so hard on yourself!!! i'm sure someone will join you!!!...just do somthing about that smell...lol jkjk anywho...my character is a womanizer, and hes looking for a woman!!! u interested?!!?? muhahahhahahaha!!!!
Not only is my character 12 (true, only a year younger, but still...), she's also shy (especially so in that sort of situation). If you think you can handle the challenge, you're more than welcome to try, but it won't be by any means easy.
lol Sieg your already in our Grp but if you wanna have your fun xD be my guest kimmy37 im sure people would love to be in your grp if you ask them ^-^ just ask 2 of the remaining people if they wanna join your grp in the meantime if you want to post in the actual forum be my guest as well
Bleh!! dont worry Cloud, I can be in your group and hit on someone in another quite easily, after all we are in the same village. oh and for lethal....where in good gods name did you get that bad ass smile face?!?!?!
xxvivixx remember that there is no one in the rp named "Seig.." his nickname is Bo and his name is Bokuro though... lol remember to look at the character profiles for names. Please fix it as soon as possible
Right got it, slgith confusion there lol sorry 'bout that!
ITs fine its fine ^-^ thats what im here for just to lend a helping hand ^-^. hope i didnt offend you when i used yuou in my post btw if you want me to change something just let me know
Lol its cool, not exactly my character but I like it that way, gives me a challenge to work with hehe! so don't worry u didn't 'offend' me in any way.
xxvivixx ok good ^-^ lol I just want everyone to be happy so everything is good... Wow lol Im excited to see what the others conjure up... and hey xxvivi maybe you and kimmy37 can join up and find another guy for your grp ? just throwin something out there. it sounds like you guys would work well together
(God I F-ing miss you Bo! Nice Character! I like the 'Magic Pipe' part, lol. And I remember you Kimmy37. You and I RPed back in that FF8 one a while back, remember? I was Oni Link. [= )
-|Name: Kinjozu Hyuza
-|Gender: Male
-|Age: 17
-|Rank: Chunin
-|Home: Village hidden in the Leaves
-|Personality: Kinjozu is actually pretty friendly, and loves to flirt with the ladies. He is still young, giving him the very obnoxious type of personality, yet he knows when to quit. When on missions, or given special assignments, he likes to take things slow, making sure it's done as right as possible.
-|Jutsus:
Shadow Style
Shadow Shuriken Technique
A Ninjutsu technique utilizing the use of a Shuriken. When throwing the shuriken, the ninja will also throw a second shuriken to hide in the shadow of the first. The hidden secondary shuriken can then approach the target without their being aware.
Shuriken Puppet Jutsu
This is a ninjutsu in which the Ninja's shadow happens to control the shadows of tossed shurikens. The ninja is given the chance to swing the Shurikens about, bringing them backwards if tossed forward, or instantly turning them to the side with a specific tug. Being a made up Jutsu of Kinjozu's, he has a certain strain on his body, in to where his shadow can only stretch out into the size of the area. With that in effect, the shurikens can break from the shadowed strands holding them, and go flying in the direction that they were sent into just before breaking from the shadowed line.
Fire Style
Great Fireball Technique
A Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
-|Jutsu Style: Fire Style, Shadow Style
-|Fighting Outline:
Kinjozu's strengths are of More of an advantage in Stealth/Speed and his Taijutsu capabilities. His endurance is something he isnt too into, and he really only uses Ninjutsu whenever the time is right.
-|Character Appearance|-
-|Height: 5' 11"
-|Weight: 153 lbs.
-|Eye Colour: Hazel
-|Hair: Brown and lengthy, flowing as low as his shoulders hieght. His headband keeps his hair sticking up, but a few strands fall over his face.
-|Attire: As Kinjozu had ascended into rank of Chunin, he had changed apperal from being a bit childish, to that of more of an assassins look. He wears a netted shirt under his top, topped by a purple vest, with white lining around the end of the sleeves, and the neck area. He wears his Headband tilted to the right (Think opposite of Zabuza), and also wears gloves representing his village. His Black pants are very baggy, coming out to what would be a good distance if it hadn't been binded down by the taped wrapping around his lower shin. His shoes are that of thonged training shoes, showing a color of black socks.
-|Character History
Kinjozu had been raised in a pretty average family, not really anything special about them. It was about the age of 12 when the young child realised his own potential. He had vowed himself to become a ninja of great power, and thought his speed and power could surpass all. This young child was so for going to a ninja academy and starting his life as a ninja, but he had to wait a few years. So, in the meantime, the little ninja guy decided to train himself somehow. He was happy with his everyday workouts, and finally, two years later, he decided it was time to leave. He knew his life could be in danger, but being a ninja was his first step into his 'nin'. Kinjozu parted from his parents, and headed towards the legendary Fire Countries Academy, where the child had heard about the once strong and famous, Sasuke. He vowed to himself to surpass all others as a ninja, and prove his might to the world. He had reached the academy school of the Leaf village and introduced himself to the teacher, and quickly made freinds with many a ninja. Bocuro had become a great friend of his, and always the one that drove him to do better as a ninja, kind of as a challange. Kinjozu was disappointed the day of his passing of a ninja, and heard the two of them weren't to be on the same team. Kinjozu just waited patiently, hoping the best for his good friend.
EDIT: For the appearance, refer to the avy.
Last edited by Kinjozu Hyuza; 08-16-2007 at 08:34 AM.
sorry but we cant allow demons to be sealed away in people ^-^ was on of the things i mentioned in my post... As for the demon part i dont know how youd be a demon without a demon in you already soo... i dont know lol might have to change a few things around. The reason why we dont allow sealed up beasts inside of people is because it could lead to god modding... hope you understand and i would be more then thrilled for you to re-do your profile ^-^ basically all you would have to do with your profile though is take the demon part out... other then that everything looks ok. If you want to be part of the other side thats fine too but please keep in mind all battles will be talked about before actualyl rped if you encounter someone of oppisite teams.
That's cool. Um, Ill edit, but can I at least be part of a clan, or was that in the list of 'not allowed' as well?
WOOOOOOTTT!!!!
SUTURUSO i knew youd find me!!! well, the name is kind of a give-away...lol lets do this thing!!!!
no you can be part of a clan if you want, and it doesnt matter which clan either. But if you arent associated with Kohana just let us know so we know not to put you in one of the three grps lol and other then that i dont see anything wrong .
Um, I don't see how I could be in their clan if I'm from the mist village... So... I dunno. I geuss I can just have my character RP about training and what-not alone for a bit. We'll see how it turns out...
And as for a clan. The Uchiha clan is allowed then? With the ability of the Sharingan eye?
no its not sorry that is way to powerful of a jutsu lol did you read my first post ? that and the clan is dead
Yeah, I just now did. Previously, I only read all but that final part, lol. Sorry bout that. Um, I geuss I will just say 'to hell with all that extra stuff'... That sucks though. It's not going to make it as interesting as it could be...
Oh its still going to be very interesting just no one will have any god characters... The only people that will be able to play thos characters are me or Lethal... and we will not obuse them they will only come into play actually when something big happens. But we will discus that later. For now just re- edit your profile so i can take a better look at it fixed ^-^
It's been done. And btw, for even editing the teams that Dante had done, I don't see how I'd, like I've stated before, will be in their team when I'm from a completely diffrent school and village. Unless they decide to edit their profiles and be from Mist village, I'm going to be alone for a while I geuss...
Fine with me. As you had stated, that we may 'join' the 'god' characters, I just may end up leaving the village to join Zabuza, as Haku had done. I think that would be fun.
ok thats fine but remember you cant do anything with zabuza and also this rp has nothing to do with the actual story line of naruto its just based off of it... So bad guys can be good guys and good guys can be bad guys and such... The teams arent yet decided but i do wish something be done about that.
People please decide what team members you want, that way we all know. Just get together and everyone talk about it
Sorry for the mix up. I shouldn't have assumed. It's all fixed now.... I think.
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