Andromeda
The Quiet One

I say it was a nice touch, and every story that has added a tall milestone turned out to be awesome, at least in my opinion. Like Bari in Zatch Bell, Frieza during the Namek arc in Dragon Ball Z (everyone was well aware of his power), the Gold Saints in Saint Seiya, and Kite Tenjo from Yu-Gi-Oh! Zexal. They all come to mind and they all make their respective stories exciting. and the way you did it wasn't bad at all.

I made it all the way to 70 last night before calling it quits for the night. And from the looks of it it the story will shift to Ayumi now. I'll see tomorrow morning what happens then.

I can believe that. I know I'll eventually get to see Ayumi's homeland, especially now that there's a score to settle with Demosthenes. It's something I'm looking forward to.

Update: I love how you are giving everyone their chance to shine. So far, I can't forget the first scene between Seiji and the ghost woman. I wasn't expecting the scene to turn into something serious so quickly after. I was also quite pleased when I bumped into Chiharu's chapters.

I will. I read one or two chapters a day on average during the week so you can keep track of where I'm at ^_^

Having read so much from you, I doubt I'll be disappointed. So I'll keep you updated

I'll be sure to stay rested throughout the day, as it helps in reading for periods of time. And don't worry about the lack of comments for now. I'll find it in myself to eventually say something for each chapter. It might happen once they are all on in your blog entries.

I noticed there's an archetype in the Yu-Gi-Oh card game that is based on the Zodiac. It just so happens to be a Duel Terminal archetype, which will play a huge role much later in my story. As I've said, I already have an end for it and realizing this little fact is just icing on the cake. The signs of the Zodiac are such an interesting topic o_o

Well I felt I had to leave before I bumped into another cliffhanger. >.> I will read it later, probably soon if not later. I haven't even started on chapter 2 in my story so it's taking a while to do everything x_x

Well, I'm not really good at commenting on so many chapters at once. But I did love Hiroshi's chapter, I didn't expect him to be selfless enough to take the blame for something he didn't do. And by the way things are looking, Yuki has a lot of explaining to do to anyone who witnessed his power. Just when he's finally getting better, too.

Why, yes. I shall spread your name across the country and hunt down those who dare to attack you. Or I could just keep reading Shift. Whatever's okay with you ;p

I want to know what becomes of Chiharu as the end of her story arc was kind of unsettling, so I'll keep reading.

Update: I made it all the way to 61, which I haven't started reading. Figured I would take a break until later tonight. And yes, I love it so far.

I look forward to seeing what you think. I might go to sleep now so I can read more Shift later. Just got done with 50.

I'm a free man. You just happen to make the better suggestions. >> You might as well call me your Sorceress Knight because I doubt I'll be opposing this sorcery of yours anytime soon ;p

Well, I can always read it slowly. >.> What do you plan to do then? :3

I look forward to reading it. Rest becomes a factor so I have to sleep sometime. But you did say to read it at my pace, so there goes your plan

I'm just going to point out again that the first chapter of my story is already edited in, so it's ready to be read at anytime ^^

It does sound pretty important so I'll read it, don't you worry ^^

And sure, innocent. Let's go with that. >.> But it's not manipulative when I already said I was going to do it. Then again it could all be part of your plan to wrap me around your finger. In that case I'm completely helpless >.<

Sounds like you're giving me an important assignment or something o_o But I'll be sure to read it. I seem to be needing more rest so I think I may not read as much as I did last week. But I'll make time if I need to.

For now all I can say is that it reveals more about Yuki that I certainly wasn't aware of. I can understand why writing it made you cry, though. Like I said, it was pretty strong.

Then nice it is. :3 I like ya the way you are anyway.

Yeah. The emotional scene with Yuki and his family was pretty strong. Amazng how he can hold it all inside.

Well, I prefer nice over mean >.>

Well it's hard to focus when I'm sleepy. I'm barely starting on 50 at this time.

You can still be nice o_o Then again you're exactly the kind of girl I would go out with so you don't have to if you don't want to >.> <.<