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    Sky is Over (open to all)

    this is a first in three part battle based on Serj Tankian's songs.

    My character is character Aphophis

    The dust spiraled round him. The street of Daam were bristling with merchants and shoppers. The sky was a light orange and there was a light breeze that blew though his hair. Aphophis never dress heavily, he wore only a leather vest, linen trousers, and a Mithril Jacket. His weapon you could say otherwise it was a huge blade with an indent in the middle. The blade it self was a deep green and had rune marking on it. This was sheathed to avoid persisturing stares. Most people would buy a few items then travel to the next stall or go to the tavern to drown their sorrows(or joys) in a barrel of ale. The reason he could spot all of these details was that his minds state wasn't as intact as it used to be. He had grown used to the fact that everyone else may think he is mad but he knew thta the only thing wrong was them. There was the occasional youngster who would steal things from teh stall and then get caught by the towns guards. The towns guards. Hmph. These idiots could only just about deal with the little brat running around never mind the massive massacre that would happen in about two hours.

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    This is my first time so don't blame me if this story sucks.

    My caracter is Ziro.

    The next town was eight miles away and Ziro was in the middle of the Desert. He wore black armor with gold symbols on the arms and legs and he wore a huge sword that was blue with red going up the middle. he had no sheath so he olways carried it over his sholder. Ziro had leg musles and chest and arms musles he also had a six pack so by his apprence nobidy really wanted to fight him. Just two moremiles to town but right there something happend to Ziro something unbelively strong......

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    OOC: If you want to talk about something use OCC or out of character.

    Aphophis stood up and drew his blade. It was glowing even more because it couldn't contain it's excitement. yes. The blade is living. One of the guards started walking towards him shouting
    "Hey you sheath that weapon or i'll be forced to take legal action, well?"
    Aphophis stood silent and still.
    "Answer me, and put it away."
    Aphophis drew one finer against his mouth. The sign for a mute. Only asylum comitted people were mutes. The guard drew back tripping over a loose cobble stone. Aphophis raised his glowing blade; the brightness all most blinding wanting the taste for blood. He brought it down with such force that it sliced through the guards armour spraying blood everywhere. The body crumpled. All of a sudden he noticed a cloaked woman at the opposite of the market. Two beams of white light sprung from her hand. The first hit his sword shattering it. As teh sword died there was a scream of a woman. The sword died. The seccond hit him squarely in the chest. The ligh did not hurt it was cold and dissmisive. He was launched into the air but when he fell he landed on sand. He looked up and saw a man walking towards him. A man with gleaming armour and a sword which he slung over his shoulder.

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    A gust a wind was all that was pushing him forward. When he opened his eyes he saw a man with not musch armor and a broken sword. Ziro had eyes wide open and was shivering. (were did this man come from) Ziro finaly took the courage to ak him " Why are you drensed in blood and were did you come from.

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    Aphophis ingnored the big mans question knowing he couldn't answer. Who was that woman? And where was he? He felt enraged but calmly enraged. he felt sorry for this poor guy who was out here. He would snuff out his life as a bit of exercise. He picked up the remains of his beautiful girl and felt the blade. Blunt. Huh. He took out a piece of paper and uttered a few words and reconstrcuted his girl. however this time there was no glow. He picked up the blade. He would have to revive her with blood of the innocent. He turned and thrust his blade at the stranger.

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    Ziro was enraged that this guy that apperard out of nowhere whould want to attack him. Ziro had few powers of his own he utterd a single word a flah appeared and while the stranger closed his eyes because the light was so great. Now Ziro was in a town were people were yelling and screaming and when Ziro looked down there was a body drownding in blood.
    Last edited by draco; 06-13-2008 at 12:34 PM. Reason: Not enough detail in my paragrgh

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    OCC:you must provide more detail and respond to my attack


    Aphophis chased after the man he reached the town that he had just disappeared from and saw people still screaming. he caught up with the other guy and slammed hi sblade into his back/.
    Last edited by Raider; 06-13-2008 at 12:26 PM.

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    Ziro droped to the floor. when the blade was pulled from his back Ziro uttered a few words and the wond was gon but Ziro was still so very tired. when Ziro turnd around he saw his sword was still in his hand and when the stranger tried to attack again Ziro thrugh up his sword and sparks whent flying and a strange woman came and a white glow came from her hand and the stranger went flying Ziro got up quickly and all of a sudden Ziro was full of energy again he suspected it was the lady.....

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    OOC: This is my finishing post do yours then it's ended.

    The woman had launched Aphophis into the air angain but gis time she had not trasported him. He landed in a stall. As he crashed into the stall a random peice of wood had splintered through his arm rendering it useless. He got up and gritted through the pain he ripped ou the wooden stake and threw it and the woman. It peirced her lower spin and the cloak was ripped off. It was her. His wifer whoom he had to kill to save. Years ago his wife had been mortally wounded by a bandit. To keep her alive he killed her and absorbed her soul to his sword. But she was standing there in front of him. He had killed her again. His sword once again started glowing. Tears freely fell down his face he was one again. As the sword grew brighter it engulfed him and he ad her slowly turned to sand. Leaving only the stone which was once set inside the sword.

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    Ziro watched the whole thing. when it was all done he droped his sword and went over and picked up the strangers sword. After that he left the town and said "What an intrestng day.

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    could someone lock this please

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