I like it, there appears to be a great message, and to me a sense of longing. I think it might speak to many people.
Okay, this is not my best work since I have not written anything in over 10 years, but here goes nothing.
Without the Rain
Oh how I miss the rain
the falling drops that would sing to me
The scented breeze that whisked away my fears
Oh how I loved the rain
It always washed away the gloom
and the loneliness could not reach through to bring me tears
Oh how I need the rain
please fill my empty heart again
don't leave me here without you, forever waiting the rain
This is dedicated to a very dear friend. May you someday find peace,
and come to discover a new and lasting love
I like it, there appears to be a great message, and to me a sense of longing. I think it might speak to many people.
None shall escape judgement, all shall fall by my blade.
My TFF family
EveVanilla
Firefly-The Greatest Little Sister Ever
Ruin-My bro working in the military
Nickness89-My brother from another mother
angelmarie190515-My mentor and greatest older sister
A Hero without a Name- My brother in arms
Raven Zecht-Herald of what is to come
LadyWinchester-The mistress of light and dark
-98% of all teens have tried smoking pot and drinking. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy this and put it in your signature.
Thank you very much, I appreciate that
I think its absolutely marvelous just like yourself. Its really creative and i just love. You know i also really like poetry and i wrote some poems myself but i never let any1 read those. Hey, do you know about Emily Dickinson????
Night gathers, and now my watch begins. It shall not end until my death. I shall take no wife, hold no lands, father no children. I shall wear no crowns and win no glory. I shall live and die at my post. I am the sword in the darkness. I am the watcher on the walls. I am the shield that guards the realms of men. I pledge my life and honor to the Night's Watch, for this night and all the nights to come.
Wow, That hit a heart string there. Well done.
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I love how the rain symbolizes protection and safety great job
Spoiler: My TFF Family:
My TFF girlfriend who hearts root beer - Chocobo_Lover 17
My brother of honourable justice - Judge Magistrate
My Canadian sister who travels the skies- R.Kyra
My nameless brother of legend - Hero without a Name
My brother, the Gunblade master - Lion Heart
My supernatural sister of mysterious intrigue - belleZ
Thanks for all the replies guys, that makes me feel wonderful! Like I said, it's been a while since I have written, but this one means a lot to me. I'm glad I could share it.
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