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    Without the Rain

    Okay, this is not my best work since I have not written anything in over 10 years, but here goes nothing.

    Without the Rain

    Oh how I miss the rain
    the falling drops that would sing to me
    The scented breeze that whisked away my fears

    Oh how I loved the rain
    It always washed away the gloom
    and the loneliness could not reach through to bring me tears

    Oh how I need the rain
    please fill my empty heart again
    don't leave me here without you, forever waiting the rain


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    Re: Without the Rain

    I like it, there appears to be a great message, and to me a sense of longing. I think it might speak to many people.
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    Re: Without the Rain

    Thank you very much, I appreciate that

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    Re: Without the Rain

    I think its absolutely marvelous just like yourself. Its really creative and i just love. You know i also really like poetry and i wrote some poems myself but i never let any1 read those. Hey, do you know about Emily Dickinson????


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    Re: Without the Rain

    Wow, That hit a heart string there. Well done.
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    Re: Without the Rain

    I love how the rain symbolizes protection and safety great job
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    Re: Without the Rain

    Thanks for all the replies guys, that makes me feel wonderful! Like I said, it's been a while since I have written, but this one means a lot to me. I'm glad I could share it.

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