^Must say I quite enjoyed it, given I'm not that big a fan of the sci-fi genre...

Make sure you're planning ahead but lol, you seem to be moving fairly fast and its so easy to end up ending your story by like, chapter 6 XD been there done that, I just can't continue the story I'm writing cuz I epically screwed up the last chapter and I just can't put the words in my head together...That and there was too many action scenes XD