I would like to make a quick note -- remember how we discussed magic? How non-mages should be less adept? I realize that everything is on a larger scale here since we're dealing with blatantly overpowered characters, but there need to be some reductions here and there. Touch it up a bit; make some cuts and only include the things which really fit your writing style. By getting rid of the fluff, you'll be able to trim down some of the extras.

This isn't just directed at the post above, but toward a handful of you. Review your characters again and remove anything you don't see yourself actually using.