Just a few pencil doodles.

[Hyzenthlay]

I just got bored and did a few doodles in my art folder, thought I'd post them up so you guys can check them out, let me know what you think?

Azriel from the Lao stories.

The original Lao squads

Aimee.

[Lady Rika]

I really like the 'The original Lao squads' its very well drawn, I can't wait to you put something up in color!

[Dimi]

Oh wow! These look really great Hyzenthlay. I like the Azriel from the Lao stories. You did a really great job on that. I can't to see them in color like Rika said.

[Hyzenthlay]

Sorry they arn't in colour but here are some more... Nearly a year later. Hope you enjoy these... I'll get more up soon.

3 from the Lao stories again.- Azriel is the middle one. The others are Beng (Top) and Arkaeus (Bottom).

Elizabeth- Drew this in about 10 minutes last night, for Lucids new RP.

Comments please.

[Chez Daja]

Azriel from the Lao stories.

Good work, nice hair. The back of his head is ever so slighter than it should be. Other than missing the curve, it's a good anime picture, very cute and the lines are all very spot on, they're impressive.

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3...y/DSC00171.jpg

Again,e xcellent pencil lining... How do you do it? Altogether cute, the arm on the left man is a little contorted, not really long enough, I think. That was the only slight of fault that caught my eye.

http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c3...y/DSC00169.jpg

Nice work on the hair, although the eye and eyebrow are a little too high. They're onto the forehead, when they should be more toward the middle of the face. Nice work on the eye, just placed slightly wrong.
The nose is simple, and just about two cm's too far from the eyes. The positioning of them is accurate enough, the eyes and brows just need pulling down a little. The distance between the lips and nose is very good.

The distance from the lips and bottom of the chin are exact, no problems at all there.

The ear is a little high. Usually, the ears start from either the middle or bottom of the eyes, and end just above the nostrils, or on the same level of the nostrils, depending on the size of the persons' ears.

Very nice work here! I would like to see more in the future.

[Hyzenthlay]

XD Thnak you for your comments, I wanted some valuable criticisms =].

I'll answer your question, which you talked about twice. The lines I draw are so spot on, as you put it =], because I base my drawings (at first) around the hair. Then I draw the facial line and build on that. I can't draw a head and add hair because their head's always end up looking too long. It's a problem, I know.

So, basically. I draw the lines more confidently for the hair in particular as it's my start out point and I like how I draw my hair, teh rest of it is drawn in rougfh first and defined. The hair, on the other hand, is drawn strongly right from the start.

I'll be adding more later today.

Also, the proportion of "Elizabeth" is wrong yeah. I also didnt make the hair which is tucked around her ear clear enough. Some work need's doing, but it's only a hobby =]. I'll work on it.

Again, thanks Chez.

EDIT:- NEW PICS!!

Well... Not so much new, just. Photo taken.

Landscape Art...
Just a pic of a road
My version of that road- Note that this was done with black and white oil paints only. Brushed with a glue spredder (not a brush) and then varnished. (The picture was taken at a dodgey angly, the actual version is the same as the road).

Anime sketches...
Mithos from TOS- Did this ages ago. It's done in pencil and then over with a thick graphics pen. It's not too good =/.

Me in Anime- Drew this about 5 mins ago. It's not finished, I thought I'd ask people what they think I should do with it. =] So... What do you think? (Aside from change the right eye to be smaller... I have shorter hair now, this is from an old photo)

[Chez Daja]

No problem.

So, basically. I draw the lines more confidently for the hair in particular as it's my start out point and I like how I draw my hair, teh rest of it is drawn in rougfh first and defined. The hair, on the other hand, is drawn strongly right from the start.

Wow, what an interesting way of drawing a person. That's really quite impressive. Usually I start on the shape of the face and add the hair to it, I've never heard of your techniquie before but it definately sounds interesting.

My version of that road- Note that this was done with black and white oil paints only. Brushed with a glue spredder (not a brush) and then varnished. (The picture was taken at a dodgey angly, the actual version is the same as the road).

Yes!! VERY nice! Loving the pure detail on the road. Excellent.

Me in Anime- Drew this about 5 mins ago. It's not finished, I thought I'd ask people what they think I should do with it. =] So... What do you think? (Aside from change the right eye to be smaller... I have shorter hair now, this is from an old photo)

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This one is good, although I still think maybe the head is a little too short and needs to be stretch about two cm's. However, it's an improvement from the last one, which was much shorter.

Lovely stuff here, LOVED the painting!

[Yuki-onna]

Ooza, nice.

I liked your techniques on the painting, I'd love to see more of these black and whites. Shading in those non-colors is very difficult,..I thought the perspective was a little off, but otherwise the shading was excellent...perspective is shit to do though, I can't do it at all...

Even though you start with drawing the hair on your anime sketches, they're still really good. Little work on proportion, especially the hands...which again, are hard...I sketch my own hands a lot, it helps. But keep up the great work, I'd love to see more!

[Hyzenthlay]

I'm glad people like my drawings/ paintings... I'll stick a woodland sketch up in a min, done with an fountain pen... Cross hetching and lines. So... More up in the next hour or so.

Landscape Art:
A... Treescape?
My version- On this I only used a black inked fountain pen... No straight lines to build from. All was done with flicks and cross-hetching.

Tree's done in rough- I either used chalk... Or pastil... Cant remeber which but I'm fairly certain it was chalk.

Anime Sketches:
Rough of some Anime guy.- Done in biro, it's a very rough sketch and was done on the back of my Law work.

Nkomis in rough- Done in pencil, very quick whilst bored...

Conversation carry on's:

Wow, what an interesting way of drawing a person. That's really quite impressive. Usually I start on the shape of the face and add the hair to it, I've never heard of your techniquie before but it definately sounds interesting.

Yeah, it's not very conventional. It works for me though, I just love anime style hair. Bold lines are the best way for me to show it I suppose. Even if I make a mistake I build on it instead of scrapping the entire drawing.

I liked your techniques on the painting, I'd love to see more of these black and whites. Shading in those non-colors is very difficult,..I thought the perspective was a little off, but otherwise the shading was excellent...perspective is shit to do though, I can't do it at all...

Even though you start with drawing the hair on your anime sketches, they're still really good. Little work on proportion, especially the hands...which again, are hard...I sketch my own hands a lot, it helps. But keep up the great work, I'd love to see more!

Yeah, I do have some problems with proportion... I don't let it bother me though. All I can do is try to fix it, my art is just rough stuff. I don't consider myself very artsy, I just like to draw... So I do it =].

Thanks again for your comments and criticisms. I'll work on more stuff, comment on this though =].

Aimee.

[Hyzenthlay]

Some people asked me to draw something in colour. I decided to do just that, I drew this tonight and you have no idea how many times I had to sharpen the dark brown pencil...

A random Anime girl

Anyway, like always, let me hear your thoughts please.

I didnt have a fleshy toned coloured pencil... So I left it white for now.

Aimee.

[Nocturnal~Fantasy]

I really like the anime girl. I haven't see the others yet. I'll let you know what I think of them once I see them.