Unfortunately I can't do much to help you there. All I can advise is to write the kind of story you'd like to read. I can come up with all kinds of ideas on the spot but they'll only be based on the kind of writing I already do. I can imitate someone's writing style but not their thought processes. /shrug

If you want to write this story then go ahead, don't let me stop you. I occasionally write at a professional level so I really have to think things out before I put anything on the page. As a result I tend to be very critical of all writing, not just my own. Writing for fun is something else entirely. As long as you're happy with what you're writing, no one else's opinions really matter. I can help you out if you want but I can't do the work for you, basically.

~DragonHeart~