Well this is a very old thread but I wanted to add something if your still working on this song. I know when I'm writing my songs and it's about to throw out all the stops in one point, and when it's at it's complete peak, I then move to the bridge. I wasn't real sure if the bridge was at the end, you don't hear that often being that it is a bridge lol. Especially before the final Chorus, since it sums the song up and makes it into a conclusion. I would say by putting in what leads from Verse 3 to the Final Chorus as your bidge...good luck. Great lyrics.