Well im writing a fanfic.... its a crossover from different final fantasy games and its set in a boarding house, all characters are teenager but still retain the things that make them who theya are. There is one oc character in it and the story kinda centres around how the other interact with him and how friendships/relatioships progress. Its not just about life in a the boarding house but life as a teenager, the boarding house and collage are on Besaid island but the story isnt limited to that area. I hope to explore other parts of spira in later chapters.

this is just a sample of the prologe:

Jack looked at the alarm clock next to his bed, the red flashing numbers told him it was 7:45. His room had no windows as it was situated in the basement, he shared the room with squall and there was another room across the hall belonging to Tidus and Wakka. He sat in the dark for a minute before walking across the room to turn on the light; he slowly turned up the light using a dimmer switch just so he didn’t blind himself. The room was a mess; the table in the centre of the room was littered with empty pizza boxes, burnt out cigarettes and playing cards. Squall and Jack had held a little poker game the pervious night. Lulu, Tifa and Vincent had joined them but it was Lulu who walked away with the most winnings, she had hustled them like a pro by letting on she didn’t know what she was doing then taking them to the cleaners. Jack sighed with a faint smile as he picked up an un-smoked cigarette from the table a lit it, he had to admit that ever since he had moved here two weeks ago he had become much happier. Squall had left after to poker game to go see his girlfriend, his bed was empty so it seem he never returned. Jack put the cigarette to his mouth and inhaled, he didn’t have to go to collage today but due to his routine he was awake anyway. There was a loud knock at the door; “Hey you guys awake!” shouted a cheery voice. Jack knew who it was already, only one person could be that happy at this time in the morning, “Come on in Rikku” replied Jack as he blew out a cloud of smoke.


What do you think, im hopeing to get some good feed back and some advice and tips. If you guys like it i will post more once the first chapter is finished, i havent had the motivation to write in awhile now and i hope when people review it will help push me forward and keep me focused.