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    ...means nothing to no way Furore's Avatar
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    This poem speaks to me Sinister. It reminds me of that last trace of the voice of public reason in my head I killed that time ago. The last thing to tell me of my limitations after I even stopped listening to my own voice of reason.

    It also seems to speak of other things such as the people you know who may try to bring you down. Or that's something I got out of it. The repetition of 'You Can't' seems to reinforce this for me. It's a good poem.
    Keep writing.
    victoria aut mors

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Thanks Furore, I still will write. Just took a pre-semester hiatus. But I've come up with a new one based on personal experiences. Not a serious, complicated, profound or very good poem at all. But one that I had fun typing up. Due to it's rather superfluous and silly nature, it has no name.

    EDIT: I've changed my mind, I'll give it a title. One sufficiently simple.


    Latrodectism

    There once was a black spider
    Who once bit a writer
    Who had sat down besider her
    To smoke his pipe...

    It was just a light kiss
    Upon his pale wrist
    It was just a slight sting
    That a slight itch, did bring

    A slight sting to a slight itch
    An itch to an ache
    His skin, he did rake
    His muscles, quake...

    His eyes sang with tears
    His pain, he did show
    But he did not kill the spider
    He did not kill the widow...
    Last edited by Sinister; 09-02-2007 at 11:29 PM.


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    The “Great” Marionette

    In a dusty attic
    All allayed with grime,
    Sputtered by moths
    And bested by time.

    Where we caught an old puppet
    Out of a discolored cage,
    Strung in a web
    Of it’s own plastic strings.

    Somber in face,
    And somber in dress.
    Sad were the sounds
    That it’s hinges protest.

    Pedals like petals,
    Hoisted the doll.
    Smoke from metal
    Helped to settle the pall.

    Lamps and lanterns illuminate
    The pantomime, and translate,
    The motions of our captive mime.
    In Waltzing time…

    It’s little wooden clogs
    Danced across the dresser.
    We laughed as we forced it
    To dance Tarantellas.

    To our laughs, it would frown.
    We’d spin it around.
    Clatter ’midst clutter,
    And rattle to ground.
    ‘Twas neither a matter
    Deep nor profound,
    Unto which wit
    Or meaning was bound.

    Amen…
    Oh Woe…
    Last edited by Sinister; 10-02-2008 at 02:00 AM.


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Liturgies of the Literate
    ---------------------------


    Liturgy of the Essayist
    The friction of a whispered word can set the world ablaze.
    And when that word is shouted, believe that lives will shatter
    Break and batter along the matter the word was spoken

    Liturgy of the Author
    So I say, that he has said, something I will say again
    In words jumbled, fumbled and rearranged I shall say it again.


    Liturgy of the Historian
    In a history of written works both witty, fitting and memorable
    Our lives sum in a swell of softly printed syllables
    That part was good and we must not forget that other part as well
    To sum it all up is a tale that was told so that we would tell


    Liturgy of the Dreamer
    But we must not let our shining dreams
    Outshine ourselves, for we were their beholders,
    That makes us shine just as bright.


    -OmniTense


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Angel Band

    Angel Band
    God is naked in his birthday suit,
    Loudly swearing into a flute
    Gabe keeps pace, fingering the brass
    Michael sings out of his ass

    God swears over how Michael sings
    While Satan keeps the beat with his wings

    Hear the music sway in you
    Hear the jazz see you through

    Jesus conducts the flow and flux
    From his perch on top of his crux
    Nobody there has the score
    They just make their heavenly roar...


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    And How We Have All Been Deceived

    What is what and,
    How was it made
    Can it be broken
    Can it be saved...

    Tell me now, how?
    How you've never felt
    So empty before
    Will you die or will you wilt?

    Breath in and out again
    After all, we're alive...
    Welcome, my friend
    Don't be afraid

    Of living receding
    Of darkness increasing
    The time flies by
    We no longer ask why

    In night now descending
    With fear wickedly mending
    With you now believing
    Life, no more deceiving
    As it is ending...



    The above post is intended for an audience of one. A single member of this forum

    -Sin


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    That one may smile…

    In stems of a steppe
    In gardens we wept
    I knew you as true
    And never a shrew

    You have a gloam
    It reddens your eye
    It slims at your face
    As you ruddily cry

    All that you've said
    But Perfervid Flak
    Can’t you have named
    The knife in my back

    We’ve come a mile
    Nay, a mile and a half
    That you may smile
    And evilly laugh

    I have in my pocket
    Halos and Horns
    How is it that you,
    With derision and scorn,
    A smile of thorns
    Leave to me
    To wear but the horns

    We have traveled a million
    To the very last mile
    That one may smile,
    And smile, and still be a villain
    Last edited by Sinister; 11-30-2007 at 03:19 AM.


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sepulchretan

    In a creak on a stair,
    Over colder memorial,
    Under my coffin’s lid.

    Away shall I slip
    Through kirkyard and crypt
    Belted and sheathed upon my hip
    A pocket knife to prick my thumb
    Blisters of wind to make me numb

    There in the mire stood a spire
    Leashed to a cross with razor wire
    A woman’s bosom which bled not milk
    But blood that ran like fluid silk

    Abreast of the breast was tacked a sign
    “Whosoever upon this dine,
    Drink not ye oil, nor drink ye wine…”

    A drip to my lip, fell from above
    Tasting of sweet mother’s love
    At the base of the place laid a crown
    A gem diadem filled to the brim
    With stiff mayhem, i.e. this poem

    Reading this script, I saw
    No need to write what
    Had already been penned…


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Registered User OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Dimi's Avatar
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    I really like this poem Sinister. Its dark but at the same time its really good. It puts a picture in my head but it tells a story and it tells it beautifully.


    Originally posted by Sinister
    In a creak on a stair,
    Over colder memorial,
    Under my coffin’s lid.
    The beginning really got me hooked on reading the whole thing. It just grabbed me, hypothetically speaking of course. (Did I even spell that right? o.O)

    But yeah. Awesome work bro!

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Sad in Effect


    raw leaves rest, once in a year
    winter spins here
    bending colors to white

    former glories, warmer stories
    were buried under crumb and crust
    bitter and hoary

    losing no sunshine
    we found her lying, burned, buried alive
    charred and frozen to the lares shrine

    gone away from home
    to pray alone
    burned by the candle she lit

    they say suffer the sad
    please yourself with
    what you have and what they had

    they never believed that once in a world
    cruelty could befall one so young
    that youth was easy and age unsung

    ravens pinched her flesh and fed
    one prying, sickly prying
    her eyeball from her head

    of this poor girl and poorer world
    only one thing could be said
    thank death that she was dead


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Untitled

    The Men on TV all say...
    "Atlas has an evil axis...
    So good men, rankle your bones
    Rattle your sabre and spit your blood"

    The war cries just don't belong
    Dulce et decorum tastes all wrong
    Faex populi, I feel so used.
    So little ago, we said so long

    But Rankle bones
    Rattle our sabres
    Spit our blood
    On foreign ground.

    Taste it
    Watch us
    Waste it
    We'll baste the sand

    We bring the blood
    They bring the bombs
    The land has the sand
    God help us...we'll make red glass...


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    ...means nothing to no way Furore's Avatar
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    Ah I've always been a sucker for war references. ><
    It's a nice poem Sinny. The line 'Dulce et decorum tastes all wrong' reminded me a little of Wilfred Owen's Dulce Et Decorum Est.
    And I noticed the reference to sand and glass too. Well written.
    victoria aut mors

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    Nice poem bro. I'm not a sucker for war references but this poem is really good. The imagery in it just gives you this gory image. Especially with the...

    "We bring the blood
    They bring the bombs
    The land has the sand
    God help us...we'll make red glass..."

    Awesome work.

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    Thanks guys ^^.

    I like war poems too, Celtic, I just don't like this war. That may sound stupid but some wars are downright necessary and just. They're straightforward. I also am a big fan of Wilfred Owen's poem.

    I think we're all tired of this war. Tired of hearing about it, supporting it and sacrificing soldiers to it... Hopefully our new president(whoever this may be) can stop it.


    -Sin


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    Sir Prize OmniTense/Sinister Poetry Collection Sinister's Avatar
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    This will be the last poem for quite some time.

    This is a special poem in relation to me. I've saved this one for quite a while. It was the first poem I've ever wrote, about a real person named Andrew Horstman, who mined in the Kentucky coal mines back when I was twelve. He was a friend of a family member and he had never been very right in his head. He died in 1998, crushed to death. I heard the rumors and whatnot, from my Uncle, who also worked the mines. This poem is loosely inspired by that. It may seem a little silly and sloppy...but I was twelve...


    The Tragedy of Dead Allen Ryfe



    Our silent miseries are the bliss of life
    They keep our minds warm and oiled with strife
    Without them we'd sink on the edge of a knife
    Still, hence came the tragedy of dead Allen Ryfe

    He screamed as he fell, downside the mine
    A shaft but twenty feet, twenty by nine
    He landed just fine
    Inches from the edge of a steep decline

    There shined his torch in slick black earth
    Foundlings cry for their mothers at birth
    Greater did Allen cry, all he was worth...

    Standing in front, barefoot and wet
    Was Allen's dead sister, little Annette
    In her pretty lace gown, with her collar turned down

    She smiled a smile that could scare a sin
    A smile that soon became a grin
    At that, Allen then stopped his din
    And stared at the face of his little dead twin

    I called to him straight, to look again
    That twas naught there, nor had there been
    He swore I was wrong, then swore therein
    And then stumbled down to meet his ill-end

    Miss we the most
    That which we've lost



    -Sin


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    As for the last poem in a while, that bums me out. Your poetry is amazing bro. Serious. And with things that I'm reading from your journal and the talks on MSN with you, I'm sure you have a lot more to write.

    For that being your first poem ever written by you, the poems itself shows how your grew as a poet from that one to the other ones in this thread. I find that admirable and amazing by your growth. The wording. The imagery. Everything within it is purely raw and real and this projects a strong emotion of sadness. Amazing work bro. Amazing.

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    See how the visions rule?
    Feel through fen and fane?
    The insane in crag and cave reign
    No hope to remain, for any fool
    See how the illusions pool?

    Force them forth with blood
    No God can nurse this brood
    No Hero can turn this mood
    Marching over where life once stood

    In spirit, forgery
    In propriety, profane
    In bounty, dire
    See how the illusions stain

    Here we live, the human race
    You see, but the lies show you
    Last edited by Sinister; 08-16-2008 at 04:20 PM.


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    This is my last poem...

    I repeat, there are no more after this one...

    I would never post this one if I knew it would never be seen, and if it was seen, by the few people who still go to this thread, they would not know why it was written...and think it was just another mediocre addition to this sad collection. So really this poem was written for myself... It's fitting I should start with a poem about stars and then end with one...

    And to my dear critics, don't be too mad at me for being unable to make sense of this poem... You read it with an unfair disadvantage.

    To Flatter 'gainst a Rival Star

    Rave on the brightening
    Shoo away the light like flies
    Cry as a cryling would…
    And curse these skies…

    Sleep Instead!
    A winter night where Capricorn had gone
    And Pisces was yet to come
    A winter night in summer,
    I longed for pretty things to see,
    pretty things…

    Look Away!
    In cycles so sure
    And reasons too pure
    To flatter 'gainst a rival star
    To refuse to care…
    where you are…

    As the stars move and spin…
    To love one above others,
    No matter where it is,
    Is no great Sin…

    To see and to smile
    To have freedom in my love
    and in my soul, remain free…
    To see that star, burning brightly…

    Don't Fret!
    But I was mad…
    I split it's light like hairs
    And tied them in knots
    Torturing anything else they shone upon
    but me…

    Enter this space…
    And curse away my gaze
    Beg my eyes to look away, but don't…
    Send me away…


    I can only hope…
    That the star must keep
    shining brighter
    burning warmer
    wherever it may drift…


    Never smile
    Konbanwa…d


    -Sin
    Last edited by Sinister; 10-13-2008 at 11:42 PM.


    Fear not, this is not...the end of this world.

    "I'm just a soul whose intentions are good..."

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    I have to say your poems are amazing. I write too,i havent wrote in a while,but yours deffinately are superior. i like the imagery and the wording you use. Your poem dosent seem to make no sense it does make sense,well to me anyway I got a good feeling when reading your poem. Keep writing!
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