RULE'S


Must be critique.
just tell me what miss-spell's you saw, and how to improve the story.
Also i wouldnt mind if you guy's tell me if you like the charater's ^^

Sheena, i did take your critique well, just didnt like who you said it. Sheena, Andro, I would love for you to critique my story! your the best um... you know... But please!!!

Thank you ^^
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