not bad, i like the first one, i will defo not mock any that you make as i cant right poetry for fudge and never could, so well done my friend
these are 2 poems i wrote the second one is 4 haikus i put together i'll try to add more in here as i write them
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Cloud's tears
mistress of the water
can you heal me with your rain
can you grow me a flower
that will wilt away the pain
i will never forget the smile
on your face as you died
it was all my fault
i couldn't save you but i tried
hero of the dawn
u gave me honor with your sword
you sacrificed your life for me
i try to live for your last words
if only i was stronger
you might be still alive
i am burdened with this sadness
as long as i survive
i think i want to be forgiven
both of your blood is on my soul
i am doomed to be forever tragic
without you both i am not whole
i run away from friends
i run away from fears
i run away from life
as i run into my tears
Vincent's curse
sweet Lucrecia
o how i long for your touch
we were meant to be
past secrets aroused
she has pulled away from me
into wicked arms
the experiment
this punishment for my sins
i could not save her
i wear demon skin
no salvation for my soul
as nightmares haunt me
not bad, i like the first one, i will defo not mock any that you make as i cant right poetry for fudge and never could, so well done my friend
I'm with Akura. I am a horrible poet (roses are red, violets are blue is about the best I can do..okay i didn't mean for that to rhyme...). That was pretty good . I liked the first one more than the second as it flowed better.
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