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    Blood note's

    *I will still be working on Darkness, but I'll be working on this one more ^^'*

    Genre: Horror?

    Prologue

    Miranda ran to the ringing phone, her movement fast, and her hair waving. She slowly picked up the phone, knowing what the call was about. She put it to her ear, and heard a voice on the other end. "Hello? Is this Miranda Solvan?" The voice asked. "Yes, I am Miranda Solvan. Im guessing this is the hospital?" She replied. "You guessed right. By the way, Im Nurse Joanne, your sister's nurse." Her sister had been hospitalized, because she had been acting strange... Very strange. "Your sister cut her tongue last night. We're trying to help her, but..." It seemed as if the nurse layed the phone down, and walked into another room. Moments later, she came back, and told Miranda some bad news. "Im afraid... Your sister died. I guess she died minutes ago... Im never sorry...."

    Miranda dropped the phone, the phone breaking, the part's of it lieing on the floor. "SISTER!!" Miranda yelled, crying. SHe heard the doorbell ring, she walked over to the door, and opened it. "Mail?!" She picked up the one envolpe, which was odd, the mail man didnt just lay the mail on the door mat, and leave... She picked it up, and opened it. The letters, which were written in blood, said: "YOUR NEXT"

    END OF PROLOGUE
    (Sorry for it being so short ^^')
    Last edited by Darkdragoon; 11-06-2009 at 07:21 PM.

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    Chapter 1

    Miranda's sister had died, just last morning. She also found a note, the words, written in what she thinks is her sisters blood: "YOUR NEXT" Miranda slipped her purse over her shoulder, and ran outside. She opened the car door, and drove off into the morning. She past by the dew covered grass, that created a watery coating. She slammed the breaks, to see that a man, was crossing the road. She honked her horn, yelling: "Hurry up! I have to get to work!" The man just walked past, not even glancing at the stopped cars. Miranda put the petal to the pedal, while watching the clock go to 6:34 A.M. to 6:35 A.M. "Damn it! Im going to be late!" She hit 106 MPH, zooming past a police officer, which, had been killed. "What the hell...? Wasnt that a cop, and he didnt pull me over?" Miranda did a Illegal U-turn, and stoped by the police car. She saw fresh blood all over the inside. She opened it, blood dripping out. "What the-" She looked behind her to see a large truck coming right at her. Miranda jumped into the backseat of the police car, hoping, the truck wouldnt hit the car. She felt the truck hit the car, the car flipping into a creek. Miranda felt water come to her knees, she started to scream. "Help me! Im trapped!" The car started to sink, the body of the stabbed police officer, laid on top of her. "AH!" Miranda screamed, puching the body off of her. She climbed up, to the front seat, then opened the door, but... The door was jammed! She started to kick the door, but it didnt help at all. Miranda thought, 'Im going to die here... Im going to die by being drowned, with a dead cop, and in a police car!' She looked back to see the dead body next to her. The water was rising fast, so she had to act quick! She looked through the officer's bag. "Flashlight, pistol..." She thought a second. "Of course! I'll shoot the window out with this pistol!" She looked back, the water was almost over the window! She aimed, and shot a few times, and the window broke. "Is this what they meant by: YOUR NEXT?"
    She opened the door from the back, and swam over to land. "Im guessing, whoever wants to kill me, drove that truck..." Miranda walked away, only a few cut's, and got back into her car, and drove to work...


    END OF CHAPTER
    (VM me what I could improve on)

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    Chapter 2

    Miranda had gotten to her office, at 7:00 A.M., in which, her boss yelled at her.

    *Going to bed, finifh the damn chapter in the morning ^^'*

    JillXWesker & MeruXDart FTW!

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