Back into Writing.

[Darkdragoon]

Well... Your story is really great ^^ Your way better writher then me... People keep citizing me about it. It's called red eye... You can read it if you want. It's cased on FF and also a disease called red eye XD Pretty stupid i know XD.
Im suppose to be on vaction >.> <.< But i cant stand not being on XD Im gonna just update my story, and then im off for a while ^^

[Unknown Entity]

Well... Your story is really great ^^ Your way better writher then me... People keep citizing me about it. It's called red eye... You can read it if you want. It's cased on FF and also a disease called red eye XD Pretty stupid i know XD.
Im suppose to be on vaction >.> <.< But i cant stand not being on XD Im gonna just update my story, and then im off for a while ^^

Criticism is a good thing though - it makes you a better writter because people are picking up on your flaws and telling you how you could improve it. Not everyone will like someone elses work because they have a different, prefered style of writting. So don't beat yourself up about it, and take the advice everyone has given you so you can improve it. Also, if it is your first draft, you have to be prepared to take some sorta criticism. Its really not a bad thing. =]

I'll have to go and read what you've written, and I'll help you with it if you want. ^^

And thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed it. =]