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    Let's make it rain. Do you write Lyrics? Jonathanx221's Avatar
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    Re: Do you write Lyrics?

    Wow, i really really like that, I don't know if I can compete with that, but I wrote a song influences by Asthenia, a song by Blink 182. It has the same basic idea, leaving the world and being lost in space lonely in a tiny vessel.

    It's called Forget, and it goes like this.

    5,4,3,2,1... Blast off.

    This vessal is quiet as it reaches the stars.
    I wanna come back and hold you in my arms.
    But now as I fly in this endless universe I sit,
    I wonder, when will I come back?
    I won't.

    Take off and go, Forget it all.
    I'll never come back, forget, forget.
    You're the reason I wanted to stay,
    Now you're the reason I'm gone.
    Will you forget me?
    Just think of me as you sing this song.

    Goodbye, I'm leaving, Won't say it to your face.
    This room, is quiet as I drift through space.
    Destination, Unknown, Just me and the sky.
    Watch me go, Look away, Forget me.


    Take off and go, Forget it all.
    I'll never come back, forget, forget.
    You're the reason I wanted to stay,
    Now you're the reason I'm gone.
    Will you forget me?
    Just think of me as you sing this song.

    These things going through my head now,
    as before were only you, now I wonder,
    What you're doing, and with who?
    I won't forget you, though I want to.
    I look down to the earth, It's a big bright ball
    of loneliness.
    If I were there, I'd feel the same as I do now.
    So, just forget me.

    Take off and go, Forget it all.
    I'll never come back, forget, forget.
    You're the reason I wanted to stay,
    Now you're the reason I'm gone.
    Will you forget me?
    Just think of me as you sing this song.

    Forget, Forget, all those times we shared.
    Forget, Forget, those times we kissed.
    Forget, Forget, me.

    Forget, it all.

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    Re: Do you write Lyrics?

    Should I go back, Should I go back should I. I am a huge Tom Delogne fan so naturally I love Blink. That is pretty good work on the song. It is pretty long, I mean, I wouldn't want to try and remember that for singing. However, when you write a song it normally sticks in the process.

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    Let's make it rain. Do you write Lyrics? Jonathanx221's Avatar
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    Re: Do you write Lyrics?

    Quote Originally Posted by hiro View Post
    Should I go back, Should I go back should I. I am a huge Tom Delogne fan so naturally I love Blink. That is pretty good work on the song. It is pretty long, I mean, I wouldn't want to try and remember that for singing. However, when you write a song it normally sticks in the process.
    Yeah you're right, I've wrote shorter songs, but I think I could remember it. I'd really like to read more of your work, I really really like it. I'll post another song after you. =]

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    Re: Do you write Lyrics?

    Yeah, that sounds fine. This next song is kind of about the battles within. About when people become indecisive regarding tough situations. I don't know if you will sense those meanings, but they are in their. However, I write not for you to necessarily draw my meaning but whatever you sense the meaning to be as well. This song is called Settle Down.

    Settle Down
    So am I.
    So is the future.
    So are you hearing now.
    I am here.
    So let us go into far unknowns.

    And how many times can you say you’ve felt afraid.
    And how many times can you say you’ve cried.
    Well so can I.
    And so can you.
    And so can everybody else just settle down.

    Here and now is where ill stay.
    Don’t go away.
    And here and now is where ill be for me.
    Just settle down, and know that everybody else is doing fine.

    So am I.
    So is the future.
    So are we, looking fine.
    But I am here just to let you know.
    That when all is gone.
    Ill still show around.

    How many times, times, times
    How many times, times, times

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