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Name- Cloud Sith


Eyes- Blue


Height- 5'11


Wait- 160 Id


Age-21


Occupation-Mercenary


Weapon-Sword


Birthdate-19 August


Hometown-Nibelheim


Ultima Weapon-
The Ultima Weapon increases in power when Cloud's HP is at his maximum (the blade actually fades away when his HP is low, and is almost transparent when Cloud is in Critical, clearly showing that the weapon's power is HP dependent).


Hit %- 85%


Battle Charge- Propels Link at a great speed. Smashing into anything in his path and Blasting all nearby.


Lightning- This spell creates an arc of pure energy which leaps from the fingertips of Link to the Target.


History-
Cloud is apparently a former SOLDIER, first class, who left the Shinra elite fighting force following an incident in his hometown five years ago, involving Sephiroth, which left his childhood friend Tifa at death's door. His initially casual attitude makes him no friends at eco-terrorist group AVALANCHE, who hire him at the beginning of the game to help in a raid on one of Midgar's Mako reactors.
There is, however, a lot more to Cloud than meets the eye. Far from being the emotionless mercenary he perhaps wishes he could be, a complicated past causes him deep inner turmoil throughout the story. Does he even know himself exactly what happened on that day, five years ago? His account of events is certainly flawed, as you may well observe.
(I) You just described Cloud Strife from FFVII. This not an original character and will not be accepted into the Masters.

(II) Watch your spelling, it is a very important part of a good roleplay.
Wait = Weight

(III) I am almost positive you did not write any of the descriptions on your own (weapon, history, or ability). When you post in a club, or elsewhere around the site, you normally have some kind of spelling discrepancies and a much lower calibur of vocabulary.
Forgery is not at all acceptable, these must be ORIGINAL CHARACTERS

(IV) I'd recommend making a new character. And make it using your own ideas.

*- Sorry if any of that came across as offensive, I'm simply looking out for the sake of The Masters, myself, and even you. If you want to roleplay well you need to do things properly.