I don't see any problems with what you wrote myself, it pretty much fits with the story just that you expanded on the world and our basic ideas. I assume this is for the Elite Seed unit group part of the rp?

I myself have two characters Koemi and Nikki one for each side of the story, Koemi I will now start working on, she's a completely new character. Nikki on the other hand is a previous character from the Exigo series, I will delay posting her up, as her story isn't quite finished, and her part in this Rp isn't quite as big so I can get away with introducing her later. Also her biography will contain spoilers from the previous RP. So yeah, want to end that if possible before I put her into this one.