Hey! Lookie! I'm back on track finally. It's been rough being off like that, but I caught up and even kept to getting it up tomorrow. So here is chapter 56. It is still a lot of tension building, though most of the chapter doesn't really even do that so much. The start certainly does, but I end up flashbacking again. I did say there were going to be a couple at least. At the very least I don't do really long flashbacks for several chapters at a time.
It was actually a pretty nice flashback. I really liked the way it turned out. I was wanting to do something different with it, but it turned out this way and I'm not really disappointed. Some of it seems a little cliche, but hey it works and it helps to cement Hiroshi's character, especially seeing at he is pretty much just a secondary character. However, he is probably the closest to not being a secondary character out of everyone with how much he is involved with in the story at this point.
Either way this was done for a reason, which actually doesn't really probably add as much weight to things as I was hoping, but oh well. Things will work out how they should. The point to this chapter will come out in a chapter or two down the road. Since as I said I'm taking my time it is difficult to know if what I have planned will happen quickly or slowly. Either way I leave off on a pretty huge cliffhanger huh. ^^; Well you'll have to wait until Sunday to find out what Yuki's going to do!
Enjoy!








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