I think the problem is that it feels too overly complex and scary. What needs to happen is for someone else to write everything from scratch again in very simple, easy to understand terms.
Oskar's writing is too complex and scary for newbs to understand. Someone else needs to do it. Plain and simple.
That, and Oskar has poor grammar/spelling. I noticed a lot of words that didn't need to be there, and some that were misspelled.
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