About the only thing that I had a problem with when reading it was that I think I got a little confused. Since as you said you changed the personalities of the characters and their histories seeing them changed, but still in the other light. It left me double checking myself to make sure I was reading things correctly. After reading on it set itself into place, but lacking the clarity of who was speaking at times in the beginning confused me. But as I said I think part of that was I was still thinking in a different light about the character, so it seemed contradictory to what I was reading. Thus had a little difficulty to seeing them as the same.

That minor thing aside it was very fun read. The changes you made to the character were definitely surprising and will be very interesting to see progress. You gave quite the dark twist to the priestess, I guess it makes her more human even though it is a little twisted what she did. But there is darkness even in the purest of lights. I'm not positive, but Tyrbane and her are old character names of yours if I remember right. I thought they were a couple or at least familiar with each, so seeing this division was quite the change in characters. I'm looking forward to see what more you have in mind.