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    Rebirth Chronicle

    Hi guys! Over the years I've been working on my very own manga/story hopefully one day making it into an anime. I've took a long break from it but I'm back working on it. I deep into finishing Season Two, so I've decided to redo Season One. Here's the first episode. Hope you guys like it! Give me your opinions okay?


    1. A New Chronicle, Beginning of a Journey!



    The story opens in the city of Shanghai, a city known for it’s cultural diversity and technological advancement. How long have I been walking this morning? I think I might need a break soon. My name is Satoru Tokaji. I’m a swordsman on a journey of enlightenment…or so I thought. I’m on a journey to find my father and track down the legendary “Elemental Stones” who power controls the world’s life and energy . I’ve had little luck however. According to legend the stones come from “New Germany” all the way across the world. It’s getting late, guess I should find an Inn. Satoru says.



    Suddenly… Hey man, you want to past through this alley you better hand over your money. That sword will do nicely too! A drunk man says. Good timing. Sir, can you tell where I can find an Inn around here? I’m kind of lost. Satoru says. You get what I’m saying?! I said hand them over! The drunk man charges at Satoru. Really? Satoru sighs as he easily dodges the attack and kicks the man in the stomach knocking him out. Oh well, I guess I’ll have to find it myself.


    A half hour later… Finally! Find one. Satoru enters the Inn. Welcome to the Shang Inn! The Innkeeper says. Hi. I would like a room for the night please. Satoru says. Certainly, right this way. The Innkeeper guides Satoru to his room. Thank you. Here’s your pay ma’am. Satoru says. Thank you kind sir! Enjoy your stay! The Innkeeper says. Satoru lays on his bed exhausted. It’s been about 6 months since I’ve begun my journey. I have one clue about father… New Germany…huh? That place is on the other side of the world, guess I’ve still got a ways to go. Satoru says sighing. Either way, I can’t give up. Satoru says as he falls asleep.


    The Next Morning…Well it’s time to set off! Satoru says. Suddenly, an explosion is heard. What was that? It sounded pretty close by. Maybe I should check it out. Satoru says running to the explosion site. G..Get back Beast! A police man shouts. Suddenly a large monster appears out of the wreckage. What the hell is that? Satoru says. Fire! Fire! Fire! The police officers fire rounds of bullets at the monster but they do no damage to it. Guess I should help. Satoru says drawing his sword. The large monster breaths fire at Satoru but he dodges it. Zotan! Joshodon! Satoru creates wind pressure from around his sword slicing the monster in two. In…Incredible! A local says.



    Hmm…he’s the guy huh? Interesting… I better report this right away. A mysterious cloaked man says as he vanishes. Thank you young man! Were most grateful. A police man says. Don’t mention it, I was close by so it was no big deal. Satoru smiles. Well, I need to be going now, take care! Satoru says as he waves goodbye to the locals. Weird…why would a monster like that attack a city. It makes no sense. Ah! I wasted my whole morning. Satoru says scratching his head. Oh well. Mind as well grab something to eat before leaving. Satoru wanders around browsing the shops and comes upon a little a small tea shop. Some herbal tea and small slice of teacake please. Right away sir. A Waiter says.


    Later…I feel like someone’s watching me. I’m probably just paranoid. Satoru says sipping some tea. Outside, a mysterious cloaked man spies Satoru from the roof of a nearby building. Well, there sure weren’t any leads here. Time to head out. If I take the trail northwest of the shop I should make it to the outskirts of the city. Satoru says sticking a finger up to measure the wind direction.


    Meanwhile… It seems he’s finally been found. A Mysterious Shadowy figure says. Yes Sir. Haha, and so it begins. Hahahahaha!! The Shadowy figure says laughing.

    What dangers await Satoru on his journey? Only time will tell.
    Last edited by Phantom; 10-25-2011 at 09:37 PM.
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