some poems i've wrote in the past

[SuperSabin]

I was looking through my myspace blog and found a few poems i've written down. These were poems i've written for someone years ago. I still plan to use poems for if I ever get a girlfriend (if she is willing of course haha). Heres my first one:

A knight wandered in the twilight sky
as he gathers his thoughts...
he looks ahead wondering what draws nigh
will he marry?... will he rule a nation?...
the questions that fill his head vary
for he spent year after year, risking his life in war
in the end, he started a family
which he enjoyed much more.

Heres my second poem:

Looking for you, I search you out
across the fields and up about
no matter where you are, no matter how far
I will go the distance, looking for you.

So what do you think of my 2 year old poems?