Leon
Resident Saint Seiya fanboy

<333 Phantasy Star Universe, great game I spent much time playing online via the 360!!

I don't know about that. I think everyone has something interesting about themselves.

It is not dream job everyone thinks it is. I do enjoy it, but it is hard work and requires a certain skill set to actually be good and survive doing it.

I test video games currently.

Yeah you can ask me whatever you want. Depending on what you ask will depend on if I give you an answer or not. ^^

Yeah, it looks like it got pruned when Merlin did his cut off of all threads. The best thing to do at this point is just read them here. Eytha - FictionPress.com This my Fiction Press profile. The Inner Man, a Manga fanfic - FictionPress.com This is The Inner Man story. This actually has the episode previews as well. So that will make it feel more anime-ish.

Well The Inner Man is only 27 episodes. And it ends, though it is about the same amount of words as Shift is currently. Both are around 300k+ words, but I think Shift has since passed up The Inner Man. It is up to you.

Well it is a comedy/drama about an artist that's a bit of a playboy, but accidentally witnesses a crime syndicate fighting and nearly dies. He ends up being placed in witness protection, but since it is the future they go a step further than just relocation and a new identity. You get a new body as well. But mistake happens during the transfer process dumping him in the body of an eight year girl. So he's forced to hid from the crime syndicate that wants him dead while being in an eight year girl's body. Lots of hilarity ensues.

The Inner Man was my first full length story posted here. Flesh is for Gods was my second. They quite different stylistically and mood. But I still find myself laughing each time I re-read The Inner Man. So that's always good.

Well the upside with Shift is that they are much shorter. Rather than the 8k words and 16 pages for Flesh is for Gods, Shift is only about 2.5k words and 5 pages. So it is pretty fast reads.

But I haven't had anyone finish any of my stories and comment on it. They might have finished it, but I wouldn't know about it. So if that was going to discourage me it would have a long time ago.

Thank you for the detailed review that you gave me. I know many have read a part of the story and commented on it, but you're the first to actually complete it and comment on the entire story. I'm glad that you glad it and it kept your interest. It does carry a lot of twists and ends up being quite tragic in the latter half.

If you have to still read 11, then yeah 3 episodes left to go.

Well you're almost done then with the story. Must have been tough to stop where you did. ^^; But if you read tonight you should be able to finish it up.

Well I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. Since you're only on episode 7, unless that's changed you're still in for quite the ride. The last 4 or 5 episodes pretty much just remove the breaks that was an otherwise slowly and evenly paced series for a crazy and wild ride to the finish. If you get sucked in be prepared to not want to stop reading until the end. ^^

Well I label them as episodes because it is written as an anime series. So they are written as episodes rather than chapters. In the end it is still going to be like chapters as writing, but it's stylistically a bit different.

And it's ok. I read a bunch of different things, so it won't bother me if it is fan fiction.