Leon
Resident Saint Seiya fanboy

Ah, well that is fine. Take time that you need.

I'm guessing that you got to the point when Yori has something happen. ^^

Yeah, since you're going to be done with Yuki soon, there is a lot of fun things ahead. There is going to be a really strong focus on Yumi for a bit. But there is going to be a lot of getting everyone feeling like they can trust each other and become friends or family. Building them up into a family is one of the themes for the arc.

Yuki's parentage is something of a complicated story. One story that will take several arcs to fully come to light. But because of it is a secret matter, as you can tell no one in the general military knows about Yuki. There will be others that know about Yuki, they won't start revealing themselves until later though.

Making progress. ^^ Yuki's fight is pretty nice, I got to do some cool things with it. You coming down to the last of the fights. Soon you'll be into the next part, some good character moments to come.

No, I didn't play FFIX when I was writing it. I love FFIX, but haven't played it in several years. You referring the falsely being accused of something or always looking for a good fight?

Yeah, I needed to address the relationship with Seiji and his grandfather. Though there still a lot of things part of their family that hasn't been explored. But yeah, things get a lot brighter when Yuki show up. There was a lot of talk about their middle school life, it was a good chance to show it. They always have fun together.

Getting so Seiji time now. ^^ It is a fun flashback and good for looking at Yuki and Seiji.

Ah, you got through a couple of chapters this time. Had to see through cliffhangers? ^^

I did tell you the cliffhangers are more frequent and difficult to stop the deeper you get into the arc. ^^

Well keep trying, it is all you can do.

Ah, out of the village means the fun is about to start then. ^^ You can look forward to the action heating up!

Indeed, I know you enjoy a good comedy. So it should provide you some entertainment. It might be more like Ranma than you know. ^^ Anyway, have fun with Shift.

It is a harem and reverse harem with action, comedy, romance and drama, which is all pretty standard stuff for a harem.

Must make faster progress. ;p Yeah I know, you'll keep trudging through at your pace. You don't have any major fights starting for another few chapters at least.

Well Twin Moon is pretty short still, so you'll get caught up on it fast whenever you read it.

Yeah, it's a rough move for him. But yes, reading more will tell you more of what happens. ^^

Then you should be happy, she gets a lot of screen time in the stuff that is up.

Yeah, I know it is just more a note.