Kerrigan

Thanks for your comment! It's like the second official one I've gotten! lol. That's exactly what I was aiming for by the way, as far as aiming for the moderate-high intellect audience. I'm so sick of plays and movies being dumbed down to something too simple to digest >.O Everything's the same. Well I hope you stick with it and continue to comment on things that you find interesting! I've also posted a few more scenes and opened up a discussion thread :-) Thankies thankies thankies!

-Kerrigan

Interesting screenplay.
I do feel it'd be a good deal easier to follow if I was seeing it acted out though, especially the beginning. :spin:
I think what I like the most is it seems to expect the audience has a certain level of intellect, most plays I've seen any time recently seem to be written with a less intelligent audience in mind with some seeming almost patronising.