Strongest Under the Heavens! discussion thread

[Leon]

Okay, folks. I have decided to post a story here in this website. This is a story I was making early 2010, but canceled it due to lack of readers elsewhere. If I get even one fan here, I'll continue posting.

I've had about four chapters already written, and they're from long ago. My skills have increased a bit, and I wanna know what you think once I start creating new chapters.

It's a crossover story, which means you'll see plenty of characters from popular games like the FF series, also everyone's favorite blue hedgehog, Sonic, and some anime characters you probably don't even know (since I avoid the more popular ones).

Strongest Under The Heavens? I got the title from Dragon Ball Z. It's what they call the world tournament (Tenkaichi Budokai).

In here, you can discuss the plot, post your suggestions, etc. Just keep it clean, folks!

[Leon]

So the second match is already under way! Who do you think will win? Cloud, or Major Armstrong?

Also, you'll find out a little more about the villains involved in this story in the next chapter. At what lengths will they go to dispose the heroes?

Stay tuned to find out!

[Leon]

Arth and Ted. Terra and the Onion Knight. What awaits them in the next chapter?

As I said before, Chapter 4 is the last chapter I've ever written, and I'll probably continue the story whenever I'm in the mood.

I hope you enjoy the first four chapters, because I don't think I'll be able to post more anytime soon.

[Leon]

Chapter 5 is out. I was busy since I also worked on another project in my forum, but I decided to continue since the story has gotten many views.

In this chapter, Arth reveals why he attacked Terra, and we also get a scene with Kuja and Saffron's loyal servant, Kiema.

So what are your thoughts? Feel free to leave them here! Discuss, discuss!

[Leon]

So, in the end, I couldn't make this work.

I couldn't come with nothing more than an ending to this story, and even then I couldn't make it make sense, you know? Hate to say it, but I don't think I can continue.

BUT that doesn't mean I'll stop writing. Oh, no! Now that this weight has been lifted off my shoulders (with me doing the lifting) expect a reboot of my very first story, which was first started in 2006. The concept was so successful that I created many sequels for it. The reason I'm giving it a makeover is because the story itself is not finished (kinda weird, huh?), but now, as an experienced fan fic author, expect another story in the future. And this time, I'll see through it until the end.

EDIT: Strongest Under the Heavens was a completely original work made by me, so it was hard to come up with stuff. but my first story, with the plot already in mind, will be much easier to work on.