Please tell me what you think of my art

[lunafairie]

This is the link:

My art

EDIT:

I took your advice on body proprotion,and was wondering what you think abou this next one.
Better than Shinra reborn?
I wanted to go for Nomura's "the world ends with you look" in that pic, but appraently it wasn't specific enough.Thanks for the advice lol. So what do you think of this next pic:
ignore the humor if you want. lol, i was feeling wierd when I drew this pic lmao haha.

http://img137.imageshack.us/my.php?i...sebleedls1.jpg

I'm actually the one asking the one question on this other forum
there should be to pictures.
I want to know what:
a.)You think of it
b.) If the coloring style is good enough.
I have a deviantart too

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!
I haven't been getting enough information or feedback from other people.

Thank you so much.
P.S.
I'm new here! So HI EVERYONE!!!