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    Why God Made You

    I wrote this for our class adviser during the teacher's month, and it was pretty much a last minute rush, so go easy on me

    Here it is:

    Why God Made You

    When God created teachers,
    He gave me times to smile,
    And also when he sent you
    To stay here for a while.
    He gave you curls I’d look at
    And dimples I would see
    When all is fun and humor
    While you would lecture me.

    He gave you thoughts to share us
    As life begins to slide
    You taught us there’s no reason
    To run away and hide.
    You shared us jokes to laugh at,
    With no one but ourselves
    And made us thrive to understand
    The heed of someone else.

    You gave us your test papers,
    That almost blew our minds
    But knowing that you taught us well
    Was all I need to find.
    You gave us endless quizzes
    And nonstop homework, too.
    Oh, ma’am, whatever can I do
    If I’m not here with you?

    You’d lift me up when I break down,
    And catch me when I fall
    Taught me well how to respond
    To God’s unending call.
    You taught me not to falter
    When all the world’s threadbare
    To stand up and to notice
    The chances everywhere.

    Now this is why God made you
    So I would clearly see
    The river of undying hope
    And possibilities.
    And ma’am, I thank you very much
    For most have come and gone
    We’d like to thank you here today
    For all that you have done.


    There it is. Please feel free to give me your opinions, even if you think it sucks.

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    Registered User Why God Made You Yesha's Avatar
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    Mmm.. I think it's nice.. But.. I think it wouLd be better if u make words more rhyming.. it wouLd make ur poem become more creative.. anywaysss.. ur poem is cute!
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    ~The Prince of the Moon~ Why God Made You Hiromi Kikawada's Avatar
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    Wow!!o_o Hiromi loves poems!!!! I LOVE YOUR POEM!! I wish i can write poems too...but its hard to find words that rhyme...

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