Hey, y'all, I got a fanfic for FFVIII in the works, right now, and I was hopin' I could get some feedback on the 4 chapters I have finished. Here's a link to my FanFiction.net page that has the story. It's the only one I have on there, at the moment, so it's easy to find.

DM Draco Moondragon - FanFiction.Net

Constructive criticism is welcome, but no flaming, please. Thanks, y'all. ^_^