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[loner-kid]

nice post sato, I particually like how tremendously far away from the right answer kivorav is with his assumption. That'll play out hilariously when kivorav wrangles corryn into a one to one chat.
"are you a puppet of the demon heirach?"
"uh... what?"
"Don't play stupid with me demon"
"I'm a demon!? Damn that red haired bimbo" (bimbo substituted in to conceal other less courteous word)

[Sato Arashi]

Yea I know, Kivorav has a pretty strong intuition and instincts, plus with the ability to identify from who's human and who's not strengthens it.

As for the dialogue you made, that reminds me of the conversation between Karin and Lelouch from Code Geass when they suspected each other lol (of course without the controling of someone's actions).

[loner-kid]

heh, that's going to be fun. Especially cos my character's going to press you for answers you don't have, you'll probably end up thinking he's either completely insane or the greatest demonic actor of all time.

[Sato Arashi]

Heh, you'd be surprised about who he's going to react, though that won't be able to come if the story can't press on, that's the thing I'm most concerned about.

[loner-kid]

well considering my character is a walking impossibiliy, having the entirity of your genetic code rewritten while retaining ones individuality should not be common place, your character is not going to believe his story. that really just leaves liar or insane

[Sato Arashi]

You'll never know, Kivorav was from a different realm either way. Plus with his personality, it's more of "I don't care about details, you're still not human" thing. Yep, Kivorav's a cold-heart tard lol.

[Meigumi]

You'll never know, Kivorav was from a different realm either way. Plus with his personality, it's more of "I don't care about details, you're still not human" thing. Yep, Kivorav's a cold-heart tard lol.

Well, isn't he. xD (Note:Unless if proven with solid evidence?)

I'm half-heartedly glad that he isn't a bad demon, and I'm relived that all demons aren't too bad. x3

And by 'different realm', it's the famous Netherworlds, isn't it?

well considering my character is a walking impossibiliy, having the entirity of your genetic code rewritten while retaining ones individuality should not be common place, your character is not going to believe his story. that really just leaves liar or insane

I say insane suits him fine. Liar really never fits in. Say if you come up to a man and ask him of his abnormal shape, and after listening to his story, you'd think he's insane.
Liar would be making some immature, conversational scene. xD

[Sato Arashi]

Yea Netherworlds, The Underworld, H-E double hockey sticks, but I very much rather call it the demonic realm, just because it's suits setting of origins. Kivorav is one of those people who doesn't want to rule, just live an independent life.

[loner-kid]

ah insane, that's going to be a sweet delight to corryns ears. And he's not really going to want to get too deeply into the truth to stop people from making the connections and linking him to his past life. Heritage is quickly going to turn into a touchy subject for him.

[Meigumi]

He can lie to get away, can he?

He can pretend he was a forest civilian. You know, Elves?

[Sato Arashi]

An elf with furry ears and wolf-like claws? I'd be one thing if he was considered an anthro race but that wouldn't be an elf.

[Meigumi]

Oops, forgot about that. >.>;

Well, he can pretend he was, errr....
I'm out. TT_TT;

[loner-kid]

nah, elve only have one point to their ear, and they don't have claws either so he probably couldn't get away with it. Although it's worth a try if the group wants to minimise attention

EDIT: woah, when did I grow furry ears. That's new to me

[Meigumi]

You know, we need to plot like this more often. Where's Kilala when you need to plot the whole story?

[Sato Arashi]

If only we can move the story now but due to the missing of an important person, we can't continue on, I'm losing my mind here...

[Meigumi]

Ah, well. I just hope she gets back in time.

[Sato Arashi]

You know, I've been given some thoughts to this, do you think that Kivorav is more of an anti-hero?

[Meigumi]

Mmhn, not really. He's more like someone who doesn't like to be around people, especially the ones that look like demons.

[Sato Arashi]

What I meant was motives, you can have a hero character with that kind of personality.

[Meigumi]

Kilala should be back from her computer break...

----Time has passed for a bit...kupo...

Still not here TT_TT

[loner-kid]

hey, let's keep hope people. we aint dead yet. ya'know what i'm going to at least give us something to talk about, so give me a little while and i'll write something up about my character to tide us over

[Sato Arashi]

We're just going to have to move one without here, yes it seems unfair but it has to move on.

[loner-kid]

actually I was planning to write stuff in the ooc

[loner-kid]

I'm going to write a little excert from corryns past, I wont say exactly where but it shouldn't be too hard to guess. As I said earlier i'm just trying to tide things over till kilala gets back so feel free to discuss what your reading cos dear god we need something to do



He pulled the small girl behind him as an eldritch flora rose from the musty confines of the decaying temple. Perched amidst the petals of the violet flower sat a strange woman. Her skin was the vibrant green of freshly watered moss and her was a deep russet red that seemed to burn with its own fiery intensity. She wore a plain white dress that clutched tightly to her ample body leaving little to the imagination. The dress had the air of an item worn due to custom as opposed to modesty and the womans body seemed to draw away from its silken touch. Her eye's narrowed on corryn. He stood, long silver blade already drawn, the small girl cowering in his shadow. She began to laugh, a sickeningly sweet laugh that echoed discordantly through the stale air.

"That's her" the girl whispered, her voice trembling uncontrolably. She clutched at corryns knees, pulling at him in an attempt to make him move "we have to run" she pleaded softly, her voice only just audible over the womans laughs.

The head like flower of the giant plant lowered itself to the floor, the delicate violet petals spiraling outwards as if in some courtly bow. The woman jumped down lightly onto the cracked stone slabs, her graceful dance like steps propeling her quickly across its dusty surface. She stood before Corryn, her shoulders shook with the last pangs of that dangerous laughter and a hand was raised coyly in front of her perfectly composed face. Her eyes althoughseemingly merry had a dark coldness to their gaze, like the steely gaze of a hunter that has spotted its prey. She ran a finger down the glittering silver of the blade.

"Is that for me Corryn-san?" She said her hand caressing the edge of the knife. She grabbed at the handle. Her eyes narrowed to angry slits. And the blade inched inexorably towards her unprotected stomach. "I expected better Alphonse. I really did"

Laughing hysterically she wrenched the knife forward, plunging it into her unresisting body. She slashed the blade again and again, slicing away at her own body in a frenzy of spraying blood and guteral cackling. Slowly she uncoiled her hand from the knifes handle, releasing corryns blood stained hand and watching as he stumbled backwards.

The small room was filled with the steady plunk of blood splashing onto the cold stone floor. The simple sound reverberated endlessly in the confined space like the monotomous clatter of rusty clockwork gears. Corryn could only stare, at her gaping wound, at her smugly smiling face, and at the rapidly growing pool at her feet. She reached out, her hand covered in the oily crimson of fresh blood. She smeared it across corryns face, her gentle touch softly caressing his cheek. She drew herself up against his body, the soaked rags of her dress pressed firmly to his chest. Her hands slid across his back and she nibbled playfully at his ear. She drew back her lips poised beside the side of his head.

"We don't have to fight Corryn-san" She whispered, her sweet voice trickling into his ear "I need that girl so please give her to me. I can make it more than worth your while" She murmered staring intently into his violet eyes. He shuddered. Thick blood was soaking through his clothes, the clamy fabric sticking to his skin with an almost deathly sensation. It was as if a corpse had pushed itself up against his body.

From within the room came a long drawn out rasp, the shallow grating of steel on bone. In corryns hand was the long silver blade, pushed firmly into the back of the womans head. Driven upwards with one swift practised motion through the weak joint at the base of her skull. He could feel the blood, oozing out of the wound to trickle down onto his tightly clenched fist. Corryn wrenched the knife through the inside of her skul causing fresh blood to spurt haphazardly from the widening gash. He was surrounded by complete silence, save the solitary drip of blood against the cold stone floor.

Something was moving across corryns chest, delicately tracing the lines of his muscles. It stopped, the single point lying ominously at the centre of his chest. A voice spoke, sweet yet choked as if something filled the speakers throat.

"Nice try Corryn-san


Mwuhahaha no one will ever realise that I keep adding to this from my writing book and extending it steadily

[Meigumi]

Alrighty then, let's hope that Kilala gets back in time....


....Nothing happened to her, right? o^o;

[Sato Arashi]

And do you think she will simply come back with a snap? How long has it been, two weeks with no notice? My patience is wearing thin, the only thing I can say is move the story along or leave it for good.

[Meigumi]

Well, we can always make another RP, except our characters instead, are OOC? Y'know, to keep a laugh.


-light shines on Meigumi-

http://i385.photobucket.com/albums/o.../Requested.png -loner-kid
http://i385.photobucket.com/albums/o...moyana/Kiv.png -Sato

ISH DONE 8D
How it was made, is a loooong story. Enough to be as thick as my head.

[Sato Arashi]

I don't mind another rp, from how I designed Kivorav, he's more of the futuristic/modern character than a pure fantasy character.

[loner-kid]

nice work meigumi, and i'm okay with doing another RP to keep us amused but if we intend to use the same characters we shouldn't go to overboard in changing the setting. If we change it too much we'd have to sacrifise a lot of who our characters are to make them fit the new world. I've got nothing against using a modern/futuristic setting but it will cause some backstory problems for me, although I can easily work around them it makes more sense to remain in fantasy or magi-tech fantasy.

[Sato Arashi]

It doesn't matter to me either way, just saying that my original idea for Kivorav is of a modern/futuristic setting but then I realized that he can fit into a pure fantasy setting with only one changes, which is of a minor thing anyways.