Naruto RP - Pulling of Puppets Strings

Hey, I'm new, and a big Naruto fan, so I want to put in a character. I hope it's not too late.

Name: Serge

Age: 18

Birthdate: May, 18

Height: 5'10

Weight: 160

Hair: Black Hair with a pony tail that goes down his back.

Eyes: Brown

Bloodtype: B+

Clothes: Wears village head protector on his left arm, wears black clothes, with his village shinobi vest.

Unique Differences: Serge has a scar from birth, it was from an evil dragon that attacked his parents and some other shinobi on a mission. It is on his back.

Village: Wandering ninja, currently resides in the sand village

Rank: Jounin

Weaponary: Serge wields two twin codachis, 4 kunai, 8 shuriken, and two exploding tags.

Kekkai Genkai: N/A

Specialty Jutsu: Barrage of Dragons
Serge kicks below the enemy sending him high into the air where he uses chakra in his feet to send him far above the enemy, and then uses the Great Fireball Jutsu , and after that brings the enemy to the ground, Serge does a devasting kick across the enemy's throat.

Other Jutsus: Earth Dragon Missile
Fire Dragon Flame Blast
Water Dragon Blast
Black Rain
Water Vortex
Black Dragon Blizzard
Water Clone Jutsu
Substitution Jutsu
Lightning Dragon Missile

Personality: Serge is an easy going carefree individual who roams from village to village learning new techniques, and doing volunteer missions, if allowed. Though he has no home, where ever he is currently residing he shows the upmost loyalty towards, and would never betray them, even once he leaves the village. The only secret Serge has is the scar on his back, for he fears others will reject him for having this bad omen.

Bio: Serge lost his parents to an evil dragon in a mission, where he got his scar, he has no parents, and his village refused to take him in, sense the scar was a bad omen to them. He has no home, as he is a wandering ninja. He has made stops to all the main villages, and stays around them. Serge spent 10 years of his life in the village hidden in the mist, 4 years in the leaf, 1 year in the cloud, and three in the sand. Some villages showed a lack of trust towards him, but as he worked and volunteered in these villages, he soon found himself many friends. Despite this, he spends much time on his own, ecspecially when he is traveling.

Great Writer and FFFC, your characters are accept and all that is left to do is post and fit into the story some where. I hope to get the story moving further along as things have come to a stand still at the minute. Our once proud RP has been neglected and alomst died but tis good to seen new members and Shinobi Masters as well as none club members joining in.

Thanks Itachi, this ought to be great. I can't wait to see how you put my character into the story.

Actually, FFFCid, he isn't the one that puts you into the story. You are. That's what an RP is, and that's what he was talking about. We have to fit ourselves into the story.

I've already got some ideas, though.

Oh yeah, my bad. I got some ideas then, so lets see how this goes.

Yay! New members!! Welcome Great Writer and FFFCid! ^-^ Yay!

... on another note... I think both because Darkwolf hasn't posted and has talked of leaving... as well as the fact that I don't really like how I wrote my last post... I think I'd like everyone to ignore it, and I will as well... This way I can try and type up a different post.. ^-^

Also Itachi, I can't wait to see what kind of connection our two characters will have. ^-^ Hope your character gets to Konoha soon!! lol :P

Well, I just wrote my post. My character has just arrived in Konoha and now resides in Naruto's old house. =P

I hope everyone likes my post. It's somewhat long, but it's mostly dialogue, so it should be a quick read.

I hope to have a chance to interact with others.

Hey, I'm a bit confused, where do I go to write my post?

Erm...The RP?
I'm somewhat surprised that you haven't seen it. Since you kind of need to to get into this forum anyhow.

http://thefinalfantasy.net/forums/sh...ad.php?t=55834
It's right there.

Welcome to the RP Vicky and Cid. ^^

I'd like to apologize for the lateness and shortish length of my post. It looks long at first glance, but it's really just a bunch of dialouge.

I really didn't like the way it had first turned out, so I edited the hell out of it. I still don't like it all that much, but I'm low on alternative idea as to what I could do for it.

I also think I'm getting the hang of doing dialouge for Sandman's Hanako. I've gotten permission from him to make Hanako begin to act a bit more confident around Kusinada, and since he hasn't been around in ages, I'll probably do most of Hanako's dialouge on my own. I hope he won't mind.

Also, Vicky, you know I'd love to interact with your character. :P We'll just have to tastefully work it into the storyline. It'll be fun, heehee.

Hey everyone! Sorry i've been awayT^T
Welcome Great Writer and FFFC, I hope to interact with both of your characters soon as well!
You all will get a reply from me soon, but I wanted to address something of great importance. Since Mr. Sandman is taking a long leave of absance from TFF, so I wanted to ask you Itachi if me and Xeim can control Mr. Sandmans Character Hanako. Since we know about whats going to be happenening to her in the future and how she acts. And she interacts with both Xeim and my characters so it would make posting a little easier.
Well I have writing to do, sorry once more for not posting in here for awhile.

Xeim and Rika you both can have control over Hanako on the condition you hand control back to Sandman when he returns. But you will have to take into consideration the character's actions as he would want them to be so if you can get into contact with him, that would be great. Also I will be PMing all other members of the RP to get this going again. My own post will be up soon when I arrive in Konoha.

Erm, I've already talked to sandman several time prior to his departure. He thinks that the RP will most likely be finished by the time he returns to the forums, and doesn't care what happens to his character. He also said that knowing that she would be taken off his hands was a huge stress reliever. And obviously we'll take into consideration the characters actions. If we weren't, what would be the point of playing her? O_O

But, yeah...I was the last one to post, so obviously I can't post again to revive the thread. >.> But Pming people is a good idea I suppose.

Since DW dosn't seem to be returning to post, and I am not going to edit mine (I liked it) than I guess I shall use Darkwolfs character. At least just for now, so I can get in a post.

Name:Zhane
Age:18
Birthday: October 3rd
Gender:Male
Height:6 ft
Weight:175
Hair: black with purple streaks
Eyes: Purple
Blood type: O
Clothes: Black. He wears a long sleeve shirt,pants,and combat boots.He wears a sheath on his back that connects over his chest making an X. Black fingerless gloves
Unique differences: His arms and hands are scarred from being burnt.
Village:Takigakure
Rank: Jounin
Weaponry: On his back he carries one bokken. He carries a Naginata on his shoulders.
Kekkai Genkai: kaisetsu " Opening" His pores open allowing him to use the water in his body as a water source instead of using a jutsu to create water around him.

Specialization: Ranged jutsu and strategy
Jutsu's:

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu, "Water Clone Technique"

Suirō no Jutsu "Water Prison Technique"

Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu"Water Release: Great Waterfall

Suiton: Suikōdan no Jutsu, "Water Release: Water Shark Missile Technique"

Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu "Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique",

Personal jutsu

Suiton: Mizu Bakuha Jutsu " Water release: Water Blast Technique
( Water forms in his hand Similar to rasegan. when the technique hits a blast of water can come from his plam creating a crater or a whole in the affected area.)

Suiton: Mizu Tensou Jutsu " water realease: Water Transfer Technique
( Blue arua surrounds his hands, blade, or bokken. This arua if contacted transfer the water from an objects structue to his own. This move feeds his Kekkei-Genkai in the situation that he becomes dehydrated. Also the jutsu caused dehydration to an opponent causing them to pass out.)

Bio:
Born in Takigakure, Zhane was a prodigy when it came to water jutsu. He quickly rose from a genin to his current Jounin level. His determination and relentless training brought him fame at a young age. Striving to be the best, zhane defeated his own teacher at the age of 11. The fame he had gained from his village died athough. On a mission he and two companions were sent on a rescue mission. Criminals were invading a mine in the land of the waterfall. Zhane was chosen as the leader for this mission. Outside of the mine people were scattered, beaten, bruised ,bleeding, and even some dead. Zhane sent his two companions in, while he was outside checking on the people. A few blast went off as his companions carried out a few survivors. Zhane sent them back in while he was stabilizing the survivors. The criminals somehow got out without his companions noticing. As the left they set off one final blast. This blast caused the mine to collapse killing his companions and other civilians.

Presently as he still lives in Takigakure people treat him as worthless. His missions have been put down to mere errands and bodyguard assignments. This pain that haunts Zhane from that day never fades, it never dies. He wants to prove himself again, but that day has long passed. Now He thinks of tavel the continent to find a new place to call home.

Quote:

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Suiton: Mizu Tensou Jutsu " water realease: Water Transfer Technique
( Blue arua surrounds his hands, blade, or bokken. This arua if contacted transfer the water from an objects structue to his own. This move feeds his Kekkei-Genkai in the situation that he becomes dehydrated. Also the jutsu caused dehydration to an opponent causing them to pass out.)

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Hm. It's a good technique.....but you can't just have a "I can defeat my enemy by touching them!" skill. Kinda godmod-ish. If you say that you only drain water in TINY amounts so that they have a chance, then you can stick with it. :P

Other than that it's a great profile. Accepted.

And yes, this is still Itachi's RP. :P But, Itachi isn't around now is he? And because this was originally organized by Shinobi Masters, as co-leader, I've (and Rika can too if she's around) taken on the task of accepting members in his absence. I mean really, we can't leave Seraph a sitting duck. >_>

So yeah. Sorry it took me so long to reply.

its with every sweep of my blade it takes water in amounts. causing fatique and stress because they are fatiquing quicker. I think i made a new word . Thanks. I sent Itachi something through the pm's , buit i guess since he isnt around that would be why i didnt get the answer back. Thank you I will try my best to do what i can.

Nah, don't bother with Itachi right now. If you need to ask something, PM me or Rika.

Alright, I see. Though, you can't have the amount be huge. Really, a good attack would make it small so that your opponent doesn't know they're being drained until it's too late. But that's my opinion. Just don't make it godmodding. ^^;; I really don't want to be strict with all this, because then I'd have to go back and re-assess EVERYONE's jutsu. So haha yeah. :P You're good.

Welcome to the RP! I hope Puppet Strings gets more activity. It's been painfully slow. :(

Ha ha.. yeah I wont god mode. My character isn't into killing as much. He prefers to get things done quickly and quietly. It isn't noticeable til its to late,and your opinion sits with me well. That's how i planeed it, but i just didnt write it down right.

Also i do have a question How to i join the actual Shinobi Masters Group. Itachi said tell ya'll about the anime i watch or the manga i read. Well Were i live you don't get ahold of most manga. Anime wise things on cartoon network is basically it. I watch things like Bleach, Naruto, I had watched the dragon ball dragon ball z and some of the dragon ball gt series. Full metal alchemist i watch now and then. I find a little manga on the net and read a little bit here and there, but i dont know what sites have more i could get ahold of.

He said ya'll would ask me a question. So ill say hit me and ill try to answer to the best of my knowledge.

To join the club you'd want to post in the club thread, located here. You'd basically state what you stated here and then I'd reply with a question. Since I've already read this info I know you watch the cartoon network version. I'll quote this (your) post in my next post in the club and give you my question there. You'll then respond within the club thread. If you answer correctly you become a genin. If you answer incorrectly you'll have to re-apply for the club in a couple months, but you'll still have permission to post in the RP. Make sense?

I'll have a post in Shinobi Masters within the next couple minutes.

Uhm, the date for my next post...I am going to try my hardest to post in every RP I'm in this weekend. It's a lot of writing, but ah well. I value TFF more than school sometimes actually. Like, right now, I'm writing this post while ignoring the open textbook on my desk....

^^;;

--Xeim--

Hey everyone! Roleplay is so slow lately but thats alright! It should turn around as longs as TFFers post! And that includes me!.
But welcome to the rp Seraph...hope you enjoy it. Like Xeim said if you have any questions, problems, or concerns feel free to pm anyone of us.^^

My post should be up soon, but I need to wait and talk to Toph first!

Name:Kit Hyate
Age: 14
Birthday: October 9
Gender: Female
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 110
Hair: Red; a few inches pass her shoulders
Eyes: Blue
Blood Type: O

Clothes:She usually wears a white tank top with black jeans and black boots. She also wears a biker glove on her left hand.

Unique Differences:Strange marking on the upper right side of her back, which is identical to the symbol of the ninetail fox. But instead of nine, it means "five". The only one of her siblings who possess it.

Home Village: Village Hidden In Mist & Shadows

Village: Konoha (Village Hidden In The Leaves)

Rank: Anbu Black Ops (Rank C)

Weaponry: Dragon Katanas-Twin Katanas made for her by Great Grandfather before leaving the village.
Daggers: She always seem to have one and keeps them in the oddest places
Crossbow[/U]: She wears one on her right arm and have arrows wrapped up in cloth and tucked securely in belt.

Kekkai Genkai: Hoyoton

Jutsus
Oiroke no Jutsu (Sexy Jutsu)-more of a distraction technique
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone Jutsu)
Transformation Jutsu
Kagemane no Jutsu(Shadow Imitation Technique)-Shikamaru later teaches her this technique

Multiple Ice Shadow Clone Technique: This technique allows her to create multiple clones from ice which explodes if opponent makes direct contact. (like gotenks kamikaze attack ^^)

Sandman Shadow Jutsu- A mix of both techniques used with sand & shadow. This jutsu allows Foxx to use her sand and shadow techniques at the same time. (Learns later)

Ice Shadow Cloning Technique-Able make ice clones out of shadows. (Learns later)

There are other techniques she learns later in the Hidden Leaf Village, but too many to list. ^^

BIO


[/U]Personality: Kit Hyate is a happy-go-lucky type girl with a big heart, the love of mischief, and can't resist a good fight. She's pretty much easy-going and the youngest of the Hyate Clan. She's also fiesty and have plenty of spunk that makes up for the fact that she never, really takes anything seriously. She also has brains to go along with that spunk, which is a deadly combination when fighting her. The only things she generally takes seriously, besides eating, is her friends and the things she cares about most. Messing with them or hurting someone she cares for definitely will put you in a world of hurt with this girl! And making he mad is the last thing you want to do!

[U]BACKGROUND: Kit was born in the Hidden Village of Shadows & Mist. Not much is known about this village and rarely spoken of by other villages. And besides now and then, this village really have no real dealings with the other villages. Kit is the youngest of her brother Xiu and her sister Nataru, who are both Jonins. She lives with both her mother and father, who were also her teachers. Kit was given her name by her siblings who originally gave it to her as sort of a joke. But, until much later, Foxx had no clue to the true significance of her name.
Foxx has always been "unique" not only because of her name, but also because of the marking she bars on her back only given to those with a greater purpose in her family. It's been a long time since anyone in her family bears it. All she knew of the mark is that she gets it from her father's side of the family and it meant fox servant. She is also the only one who is able to use both ice and shadow jutsu since usually those born in this village could only do either shadow or ice jutsu. Her mother is actually the twin of Haku's mother who was seperated from her twin at birth and brought here to this village to be raised. Of course, none of this comes out until much later. As a child, she was never allowed to go to Ninja Academy in her village, being homeschooled by her parents.This was never explained to her, although she later finds out why. But even though she was taught ninjutsu, genjusu, and taijutsu from home, she took the test and pass at the academy on her first try, automatically becoming a genin. She was a happy-go-lucky child and was often found going hand to hand with the boys or taking on anyone who dared challenge her. Sometimes accidentally freezing one of them.

At 12, her parents and her siblings moved to Konoha, thinking that it would do some good for Kit to have some new scenary. But, Kit knew better. She had a bad feeling in her stomach. Already graduated from Ninja Academy, she later entered the Chunin Exams and passed it, later becoming a honorary Black Op. She was the youngest Black Op in the village. She has their respect and even made some new friends! Which she was glad of. But, the mystery of her pass remained. So many questions...

(Now how does that sound?)

Erm... 90% of your character's Jutsu techniques are Naruto's techniques...
Mind you, Naruto is an NPC in this RP, so it would be somewhat weird for your character to have these particular techniques. Unless you can come up with some distinct way for your character to have learned these techniques, then your character is pretty much a Naruto knockoff. >_>;

Why would your character also even have Sexy no Jutsu? She's already a girl, all she needs to do is strip. >_>;

First off, some of Naruto's own jutsu is also learned in my character's village as well! So, of course, some of her jutsu matches Naruto's own. Plus, the Shadow Clone Jutsu itself is not only learned by Naruto, but other Naruto characters as well. And the sexy jutsu is actually a made up jutsu by Naruto, but distinct because instead of a girl, she becomes a guy! ^^ After all, there are female shinobi teachers as well as guys! It's a made up jutsu anyways. (Please just let me have this one!"

Oh, and Chidori, Transformation Jutsu Techinique are also learned by other shinobis. The Shadow Imitation technique I got from Shikamaru! ^^

Well, I haven't posted in this thread in a long while, and I'm very sorry. Welcome to the RP Seraph and Fivetail Uzamaki. Either way, I hope to get more involved now, and let's start this thing back up.

Ok whoah. >_> I have a bit to address here.

Fivetail Uzumaki: ...Ok. I'll start off simply. Chidori was developed by Kakashi. In the show, the only known characters to posses chidori are Kakashi and Sasuke. You are in no way related to either. You also don't have the sharingan, so you couldn't have copied it.

Yes, you got the shadow imitation technique from the Nara family. Did you steal it? I'm sorry, I'm trying to put this as kindly as possible. I don't want to attack you. But...those techniques are Nara family only. Sure it's POSSIBLE for others to learn it...but uhm...not probable.

And....you're version of the sexy jutsu exists. It was developed by Konahamaru. I have no qualms with you using it, but don't get to thinking you made it up. If Itachi or Rika objects you're going to have to relenquish use of it though. ^^;;

And, your ice cloning shadow technique thingy....you do realize that there are many different types of the so called "kage-buushin" right? You can make them out of sand, or water....and guess what? They have the same functionality. So, why would you mold ice clones out of shadows whn you could do so out of water? Unless half the clones come from water and the other half shadows, it doesn't make sense to me. Can you explain?

Ok...I don't want to sound like I'm pestering you and trying to purposely pick your profle apart. But, Toph's right that your character is like a Naruto knock-off. And, if you read my profile, you'd see that my character is going to start morphing into a Naruto like character. My profile overlaps where my character is at this point. Right now she's unsure of herself, but looks up to naruto as a dad/role-model. So she's going to start becoming like him.Now....we're going to throw another character in there who, granted started out that way, but acts just like her? I'll give it a shot, but make sure you distinguish the difference between foxx and Naruto, and Kusinada when that time comes.

Ok...one more thing. The tatoo. She's not a container for a demon/angel/hybrid thingy is she? We already have 2 or so of those, and more is...well, unprobable in my mind.

If any of the other Kages have any objections to the things I've said here...object. I've noticed the club's dying a bit, so I'm under the impression the others are inactive (again). So...yeah. Here I am.

Other then those things, your profile is quite interesting. I look forward to seeing how your character develops. ^^

Anyway....where is everyone in posting? It's been a while since there was a post in the RP.

Well, you know my status. I'm in the process of moving, so all of my RPs are on pause at the moment. I even have to disconnect my computer tomorrow, too. >_>;

So you won't be seeing much of me, dear. ^_^;;

I dropped a post, but no one is there to reply and i dont just want it to be me and you back and forth. If that is what it takes, then i guess we will just have to play with ourselves. Dont think of that in the wrong way. May i ask who all has the demons. Plus freely controlling ice is Hyoton. Being able to control water and wind through bloodline trait. that also wasn't made up.

Ok. *sighs* I think I can help fivetail out a little bit. Okay. From what I've read, she does mention that not much is known about her village, so it is unsure what these ninjas of her village is possibly capable of. Which means that it is indeed possible for her to have learned at least some of these techinques. As for Chidori, I agree that it is impossibe for her character to have learned the techinque.
Secondly, I think it is possible for her to have the Shadow Imitation Techinque. Remember she comes from the village of Shadow & Mist, which means that it is possible that this definitely possible for fivetail to have learned the Shadow Imitation Technique. Shadow and Ice probably being her village's specialty.
I've watched the whole Naruto anime and know for a fact that Naruto taught Konohamaru the sexyjusu. It's actually a made up jutsu that practically anyone can learn if they are that goofy enough. It is just your basic transformation jutsu with some quirks! ^^
If you've seen Mortal Kombat, Sub-Zero is known as a Kori or cryomancers being the correct term. "Kori" is the Japanese term for ice. Cryomancers do have the power to manipulate ice at will. There is really no jutsu to it. So, what normal ninjas cannot do, Foxx is able to do. So, technically, her ability to shape shadow clones from ice is possible.
All it does sound like a naruto knock-off, I think her character is more like a work in progress. I think she's still working on her character background. So, take it easy on her guys. I'm sure she'll come up with something. ^^

bBUt would Kori still be the same thing as hoyton. Hoyoton allows a person to makes ic by using water and wind chakra )i.e. Haku). SO wouldn't it be more probable for her to have Hoyotn instead of a bloodline of Shadow and MIst. Also if she had a Hoyoton bloodtrait she could technically learn rasengan easier because she has an affinity to wind chakra. Also along those lines if she had the affinity to wind and water chakra she culuse water prison jutsu with one hand and hit the person with the other hand using rasengan. even though that also would drain a good deal of chakra.