Divided: OOC.

**deanharagatsu** · 09-28-2009, 10:41 PM

yes I read that thanks but look at the post heroughkly Cro is a colledge not a city where allys can hide things even if they were specialist why would they come wiht litle force when theres a hallways full of students at Cro that may be more than willing to capture them I med Dean is searching for his mother in the prisons of Cro and He attends the school and cant even breach it so that is why I say here would be more than just 2 or 5 wila in the school suddenly attackign a student even if it was mpty they had to make sure no sound was made to atract further attention from others . I read he post but just having a 2 on 2 fight in a middle of the hallway where the wila started attackong OTHER students as well seems pretty muchright to me hand chosen or not how well can you hand pick one person to take a hole school down? Even if the king isent doing it himself and I never sayed we knew where they were from but I had to secribe them sumhow.

**Hyzenthlay** · 09-29-2009, 09:23 AM

Gah, sorry I've been MIA guys. I've been moving to my University. It's taken me a while to get things up. Well, yesterday and now. I was packing and working all w.e.

Anyway, I'm here now and I'm going to settle a few things.

Dean, Lucid is right. Arguing about it just makes you seem all that more reckless. You should be reading ALL of the RP posts. They are important and are supposed to direct you. You shouldn't ask a question and then disregard or ignore what I've written in reply. I haven't even read you post yet and I already know I'm going to correct it. That's not a good sign, is it?

Atma- I'm really sorry it's taken me this long to reply. You needn't have waited. I could have adapted it, not that the post will need it when it is up. This is the post that will send us all on our way to knowing what we are aiming for.

Lucid- Thank you very much for holding fort in my absence. I appreciate it a lot.

Ulteka- I told you that you can have a member of Wila be your villain, so long as it fits. If it is terrible outlandish and pointless I'll ask you to remove it.

Freya- Thank you for placing up your college Master. =]

I'll go and read the new posts now and edit this post with my thoughts.

EDIT 1: Dean-

Two students dressed in other wila schools cloths walked towards us as we had made the scene. One student blew me straight to the ground knocking my book straight out of my left arm and hand using a lance and hit me with it as he laughed"this is going to be a peace of cake." He sayed obviousley was taking it easy on me as Dean took out his katannas. He held his lance facing me. Another student had a wooden staff as he attempted to blow Wendy further up. Dean then leaped in the air and slashed as fast as he could at the student with the lance with his right katanna bladee as an icy breeze flung straight at him and froze him were he stood. Dean's eyes glew an icy tone as He growled at them both saying" I......was......reading that!!" He yelled as he gathered water around his left kattana blade and blasted it straight at the guy with the stick and he attempts to defelect it by twirling it around as he falls on the ground. Dean's eyes focused upon the student with the lance covered in ice as it was about to break. the ice around his bodie slowley shattered as Dean growled more in anger. Dean was mad to the fulelst because he hasent had sleep and now these guys from another academy choses to pick on him. Dean held his blade tight faced at them ready for battle as the hole school broke out in a war zone with other students from the same academy as the ones he was facing.

NO! The college of Wila now works as an underground college. As Lucid said and is stated in the first OOC post Wila was destroyed. The fact that your character would even know who Wila WERE is stupid. A Wila uniform? When did I mention a Wila uniform? I didn't, I said that Welia were acting secretly. That's in the very first OOC post, too. As the survivors of Wila work for Welia they wouldn't be outwardly admitting to being Wila. Especially when their college and fellow students were destroyed. You need to read through things before writing. The rest of us are trying to hold a storyline and you're disrupting it. Read through things, please. I don't want to read things that I have said not to do again. It's quite insulting to myself and the rest of us that are taking time and the RP seriously.

Also, how many times have i told you to make the end of your post clear? Your post has an open ending. We don't know where your charcter is, what he's doing, where the bad guys are... It's not fair on Freya to leave her to make the move on your writing. Clear it up!

-Sigh-

Anyway Ulteka, yours is good. Loaf, yours is good as always and i'm good with yours, too, Freya.

Thanks for the good stuff guys. Keep it up!

Hyz.

**Ulteka Mako** · 09-29-2009, 01:19 PM

Hyz, I posted up my new post. I think you will find it very good. I am very pleased with it myself. Tell me if there are any mistakes, which I don't think you will have a problem with. But tell me if there is.

**Lucid** · 09-29-2009, 04:09 PM

Ulteka, My only problem is that Nizuka states the fact that she's from Wila. It would be better for her to respond to Nathan's question of "Do you know how many people died because of you and Drasna?" with something like "If that's what you want to believe." since it's obvious that they want to confuse everyone into thinking it was Drasna.

Remember Hyz's earlier post where Rafiel talked about sowing the seeds of mistrust? It means that they're trying to confuse and cause distrust between everyone so that rather than fighting the real culprit, they'll end up fighting against each other instead.

**Ulteka Mako** · 09-29-2009, 05:58 PM

Originally Posted by Lucid

Ulteka, My only problem is that Nizuka states the fact that she's from Wila. It would be better for her to respond to Nathan's question of "Do you know how many people died because of you and Drasna?" with something like "If that's what you want to believe." since it's obvious that they want to confuse everyone into thinking it was Drasna.

Remember Hyz's earlier post where Rafiel talked about sowing the seeds of mistrust? It means that they're trying to confuse and cause distrust between everyone so that rather than fighting the real culprit, they'll end up fighting against each other instead.

I edited my post. This is what I put.

Nizuka: "It wasn't Drasna that attacked Sol. It was Wila. I am apart of Wila college."

Nathan: "Impossiable... Wila was destroyed so long ago. Everyone in the college was killed. They are gone."

Nizuka: "That is true that Wila was destroyed. But, some of us survived. Very few at that, but some are still around. I am one of those few and I am stronger then ever. We are all stronger then ever. Do you honestly thin that the worthes scum of Drasna could do that much damage and make a whole school vanish from the very world itself? Thats why I say cut down on that grass. Your looking pass the truth and not waying out your options. But it seems like someone survived from Sol. Now you have to die."

Nathan: "You bitch... Your a not part of Wila. I just think that you are trying to cover up the fact that Drasna is apart of all this and you are trying to protect them by sayng Wila has come back from the dead. But it is not going to work on me. But in any case, you are still going to die.

That should be ok. If not, then I am going to have to change my whole post around just about and it is a really good post. It should be good enough that my charecter still thinks that Drasna did attack Sol and the others.

**deanharagatsu** · 09-29-2009, 07:04 PM

LET ME MAKE THIS LOUD AD CLEAR I STATED WILA UNIFORMS BECAUS EI HAD TO IDENTIFY AN ENEMY I DID NOT KNOW OF I DID NOT STATE DEAN KNEW WHO THEY WERE IF I DID IT WOUKLD BE LIKE THIS"Dean stops his attack and states"so youa re from willa?" READ THE ****IN POST PEOPLE AND WIHT THAT SAYED I WITHDRAW MY CHARRIE BECAUS EHT ESIMPLE FACT EVEN IF WILLA IS NPC BASED OR OTHERWISE WHY SHOULD IT BE MADE UP TO ME TO CONTROLL THEM LET ALONG I HAVVE READ IT AND READ IT AGAIN ALL I KNOW IS THEY WERE ONCE FROM THEIR CAOLLEDGE SO I SUSPECTED THEY HAD A UNIFORM OF THEIR!!!! OWN SO FOR ALL THAT ID LIKE TO SAY SCREW THIS IT IS TOO COMPLEXED TO MY UNDERSTANDING AND BYE

**Ulteka Mako** · 09-29-2009, 09:52 PM

Originally Posted by deanharagatsu

LET ME MAKE THIS LOUD AD CLEAR I STATED WILA UNIFORMS BECAUS EI HAD TO IDENTIFY AN ENEMY I DID NOT KNOW OF I DID NOT STATE DEAN KNEW WHO THEY WERE IF I DID IT WOUKLD BE LIKE THIS"Dean stops his attack and states"so youa re from willa?" READ THE ****IN POST PEOPLE AND WIHT THAT SAYED I WITHDRAW MY CHARRIE BECAUS EHT ESIMPLE FACT EVEN IF WILLA IS NPC BASED OR OTHERWISE WHY SHOULD IT BE MADE UP TO ME TO CONTROLL THEM LET ALONG I HAVVE READ IT AND READ IT AGAIN ALL I KNOW IS THEY WERE ONCE FROM THEIR CAOLLEDGE SO I SUSPECTED THEY HAD A UNIFORM OF THEIR!!!! OWN SO FOR ALL THAT ID LIKE TO SAY SCREW THIS IT IS TOO COMPLEXED TO MY UNDERSTANDING AND BYE

One down. Man this dude has a temper. Its just an Rp. I could bearly read his post anyways with all those typos.lol. But lets just forget about his post and move on.

**KeybladerXIII** · 09-30-2009, 07:31 AM

Good God, this fight is getting us nowhere. Yes, let us move on. My next post in my usual "noir-style" will be up soon. I'm going to change things up to be a little more interesting.

**Imposter** · 09-30-2009, 08:25 AM

Alright I posted, it just is mostly to build character though. I'm excited to see where your post takes everyone Hyz.

**KeybladerXIII** · 09-30-2009, 08:43 AM

Okay I posted mine up, sorry if it's a bit too extreme, I just wanted to move things along a bit.

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-01-2009, 04:10 PM

Just so all of you know Lucid is my second-in-command. My vice president if you will. This is based on the fact that I have alot to do now that I have moved countries. I won't have much time to be the boss around here, but I'll certainly do my best. I'll ask Lucid to relay problems to me. That way I can work to solve them. Any minor ones Lucid will handle directly.

Dean's gone. He chose this himself, though I was planning it as I said anyway. I'm sorry to Freya if this causes you problems. He was a problem himself and, though it may be a blow for you. We'll all meet up soon so don't be disheartened.

My post will be up in a day, tops. Like I said I've had alot to do and I haven't been giving the RP my full attention. The direction, I hope, will interest you all.

I'm going to read the posts right after this and, as always, will edit accordingly.

EDIT:
As always the posts are great, guys. Ulteka, I assume that you villain won't go round to everyone announcing Wilas involvement? It's fine the way it is, though.

Great again guys, keep it up.

Hyz.

**Gilgamesh2000** · 10-01-2009, 05:52 PM

Hey hope you don't mind me joining?

Name: Alsvein Wight

Age:18

Personality: Wise, usually a loner likes to listen to music and just relax. Pretty laid back but can be serious if needed. Always calm at the sign of trouble.

Appearance: Black over coat with a white under shirt. Blue pants with wooden sandals and black tobi socks. Long silver platnum blonde hair let down. Never smiles, usually a straight face. Cool steel gray eyes with fine tone skin.

College: Drasna

Weaponry: Mainly a longsword or katana

If I need to add something please let me know. Thanks

**Ulteka Mako** · 10-02-2009, 10:41 AM

Originally Posted by Hyzenthlay

EDIT:
As always the posts are great, guys. Ulteka, I assume that you villain won't go round to everyone announcing Wilas involvement? It's fine the way it is, though.

Great again guys, keep it up.

Hyz.

Don't worry, my enemy will not go around spoiling it for everyone. She is my villian, so she will only be messing with me. But I have a really good next post. All I am waiting for is Lucid and you to post so it could give me some better idea of what is going on next.

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-02-2009, 11:30 AM

Righto, I'm scanning my post now, checking for errors. Should be up later tonight.

Hyz.

**Freya** · 10-03-2009, 02:36 AM

Originally Posted by Hyzenthlay

Dean's gone. He chose this himself, though I was planning it as I said anyway. I'm sorry to Freya if this causes you problems. He was a problem himself and, though it may be a blow for you. We'll all meet up soon so don't be disheartened.

It doesn't cause any problems, but I may have to write Dean's part, too, as I can't just skip the part in which he bumped into me. I'll try to let him escape or something like that... Still have to think about it. :/
(Btw. great to hear that we'll meet up soon ^^)

Edit: Done. ^^ I hope it's okay that I just lost him when the great fight started. I couldn't think of another way to solve this little problem. ^^"
Also, I switched the attackers back to those strange people Wendy saw a while back. ^^

**Ulteka Mako** · 10-05-2009, 02:57 PM

Sorry I haven't been around. I will have my new post up soon. I have to read up on Freya's post aswell so I can get an idea on what she is doing. I know we are probably all close to running into one another, but I want to do something else before I run into you all. So like I said, I will have my new post up later on tonight. Still got soem stuff to do.

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-06-2009, 11:38 AM

My post is finally up. I'm really sorry, guys. Hope you enjoy it.

Anyway I have to do some studying right now but when I get back I'll read all teh new posts.

Oh and, Freya. If you want to control Dean that's fine. he's effectively an NPC now, as we can't leave him oyt. Do what you like with him.

EDIT: Great posts guys. Freya, I'm really glad to see your posts becoming more lengthy. No problems once again. XD Well done and keep it up.

Hyz.

**Psiko** · 10-07-2009, 10:05 AM

I fear that I overestimated my ability to dedicate enough time to this throughout the semester, but in reality I find that most days I have little enough time to do anything other than schoolwork and a small amount of personal writing. I see no real way for me to be quite active in both this and the Factions.

Faced with a choice of which one to try and dedicate time to, I am going to choose to attempt to revive the already-fading Factions. You guys are all doing great and I'll be reading this with much anticipation to see how you all unfold this. It has been great to read so far.

**Imposter** · 10-07-2009, 10:23 AM

Aye Psiko it is a shame to see you step out, but such is the life. Hope we can keep you interested readin' though. Off topic what the junk is Factions?

loner.kid the plan is to have Zippy coming to Drasna in my next post. Is there anything I should know about as far as the attack going on there I should know about. I just don't want to step on your toes by writing something that shouldn't have happened and so forth.

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-07-2009, 02:16 PM

Factions is a new RP section, it focuses on battling and faces TFF members off against eachother. David (Psiko) is the co-leader of my own Faction. So far it's been slow but Psiko wants to revive it, where as I'm losing my faith in it. Nevermind, I'm eagerly awaiting it stating properly.

I'm sorry to see you go David, hunny. I guess we can try to keep you entertained, though. =]

Hyz.

**loner-kid** · 10-07-2009, 03:19 PM

ooh, thanks for warning me Atma. As far as the attack on Drasna is going it's concentrated on one of the three dormitory buildings and far enough away that it isn't attracting attention from the main school yet. There are only 5 mages in the attack but seeing as they are only fighting the younger students it is essentially a massacre. In the attackers group is an unknown magic user, 2 flame users, an earth user, and an ice user. The unknown magic user has instigated a teleportation jamming or dampening field that stops any student from escaping in that way. The dormitory itself is largly ruined, there are rough holes potmarking its outer layer from the size of a fist to a small bus. I'm still in the process of writing my post but i'll give you a summery, Aloin manages to knock out the unknown magic user to allow the survivors to be teleported away by Vanessa. Unfortunately this leaves him pretty screwed because he had to leave the group to knock out the mage and he wasn't teleported with them, he is not a match for the other magic users and he's essentially running for his life.

If there's anything you're unsure or you think i've neglected something importannt just say

**Lucid** · 10-07-2009, 10:18 PM

Posted our (Hyz and I) second joint post.
It's supposed to come right after Nathan's first post on the Page 2.

Hyz, I edited a few things in my post from what I had originally sent to you, but it didn't really change anything on your part so I didn't think it was necessary to flood your PM box and bother you with details that didn't affect your character, especially since you're so busy. I'll try not to be so indecisive with my posts in the future. x_x

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-08-2009, 09:33 AM

No problem, Lucid. I read it and you haven't changed all that much, as far as I can tell, anyway. It doesn't bother me at all.

I'm working on my solo post now. Hopefully I'll get it up quicker than my last post but I can't make any promises.

Hyz.

**loaf** · 10-08-2009, 12:25 PM

Been busy coming up with new ideas and looking for a job. I'll post and hopefully have my character caught up with the story by the next post.

**Ulteka Mako** · 10-09-2009, 11:47 AM

I am hoping to have my next post up by tonight, but I might not be able too. But if not tonight, then it will be up some time tomorrow. I am just trying to come up with something good after my last post. It has to be something awsome to go with my last post anyways. So I am going to take my time on this one.

**loner-kid** · 10-11-2009, 08:34 AM

ugh, my next post may take a while before it's completed due to microsoft word not letting me edit documents any more. I'll still be able to do some writing for it, but that'll only be during my breaks at school until I sort this out

**Ulteka Mako** · 10-13-2009, 12:09 PM

My latest post is up now. I am sorry it took so long. Now that I got all that out the way, I can really get to the good stuff of the role play. I can't wait to fight these Wila people.

**Hyzenthlay** · 10-16-2009, 07:30 AM

Where is everybody? Come on guys. =]

I'm gonna post mine up today, hopefully it will be a kick-start?

Hyz.

**Imposter** · 10-16-2009, 09:54 AM

Hey everyone, I've been having a little trouble writing my next post. I don't want to fill in anything with Zipp getting to Drasna since there are two others already writing from students perspectives. It seems like there is a lot to fill in background wise ya know?

Like which teacher was taken, the attack currently happening with Loner kid, and such. I don't really want to make it all up myself, it feels like I'm taking charge. Any ideas?

**loner-kid** · 10-17-2009, 09:24 AM

I'm still having problems with running word on my computer so I haven't been able to do anything extra so far, which has been a little irritating. I still don't now when i'll be able to finnish the post...
Oh and Atma, I hadn't really planned for my character to witness the disiperance of a teacher so if you want to do that one feel free. I trust your judgement enough to know you wouldn't restrict me too badly. Besides how often to people enter a school via the dormitory

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