Ah. Okie dokie. A bit of a 'some time earlier' post? Fair enough, Judge. My mistake.
Hyz.
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Ah. Okie dokie. A bit of a 'some time earlier' post? Fair enough, Judge. My mistake.
Hyz.
Posted our (Hyz and I) super duper long post. x_x
It took forever to fix the fragmented text! >_<
You guys better appreciate it! :P
Dude that was one epic post, great read.
Alright, so it was just some misreading and misinterpretting on my part, my apologies. Thanks for the clarification. Actually I'm somewhat glad my assumptions were incorrect, I much prefer massacres to strategic withdrawals.
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. We worked really hard on it over the last few weeks. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by Judge Magistrate
Name: Marlyn Tibalt
Age: 20
Personality: A lady with good nature and a soft spoken voice. She dislikes pointless nonsense, but always enjoys fun nonsense that has a purpose. She believes friendship and bonds is an important thing in a person's life, and also believes that life is a precious thing. She would never personally take a life if she had the choice, but that is where her familiar came in. The Succubus would do the dirty work for her.
Appearance: Marlyn wears a large black coat with many deep pockets inside. These deep pockets house all of her knives and daggers. Underneath the coat she wears a black tank top and crimson shorts. Her legs are covered by a black fishnet pattern while her feet are covered warmly by a pair of platform heels. Her skin is a little pale from spending a lot of time indoors, but it also tans easily.
College: Drasna
Weaponry: Her weaponry consists of her Succubus familiar. But she also arms herself with daggers and throwing knives to assist her familiar in battle.
Came up with another character that I will be talking to Hyz about. 8D
This will be so much fun for everyone in the later events of the RP. ^^
Nice post Heartless. :)
I really need to get my next post ready, time to start brainstorming.
Victoria- Just PM me whenever. :) I'm interested to see what your plans are.
Heartless- I agree with Lucid; great post. I like how you incorporated the events myself and Lucid have been through. It's helped to outline your characters personality well. I'm eager to find out what Nyx' intentions are. Really enjoyed it.
Judge- Glad you enjoyed it. It was really fun to write and, like Lucid said, we worked hard on that. :D
Hyz.
Just restating what you said a few posts ago. This still applies right? I found this while researching.Quote:
Originally Posted by Hyzenthlay
Absolutally. :) All of those things are ongoing. They'd know Linear as the girls with silver hair. They wouldn't know she was from Wila, though. :)
Have fun with it R. Kyra.
Hyz.
Got another post up. Give a bit of insight into my character and the relationship he has with his instructors. I felt like Isaac needed a bit more fleshing out.
Nice post man, can't wait to read the next one you get up. He seems a lot like me when I get angry lol.
One thing I noticed. Either Isaac can hear thoughts or Roy really didn't say that thought in his head. I found it kind of weird when you stated his thoughts.
Are you talking about the italics part, because I don't think that Isaac was responding to that?
The italics are thoughts. I reread my post, and I don't see what you are meaning. And thanks by the way Judge haha.
Yeah, Isaac wasn't responding to the italics. I can kind of see how that would be mistaken... a little. (If you skimmed it, you could. xD)
Hmmkay then. It fits, I just thought it was a bit weird.
No prob, I'm here to help in any way I can.Quote:
Originally Posted by Ruin
Uh, Judge? Your post is good and all, but it doesn't follow the timeline of events. You don't even really describe how your character stumbled onto my character's office/room. Which happens to be in a building... through a corridor. It's not a dorm room. It's a tutor's office....that she just happens to also live in.
And the two girls are in there.. after Cro got annihilated. Yet your version of Cro is just fine and dandy.
Perhaps you should expand your post to cover the Cro attack? Kill some dudes, get injured a bit.. Just a thought.
And mayhaps you could've had the rival revenge thing happen during the journey as well? Just another thought.
Oh, okay, I didn't realize that all of Cro was blown up. I can have the attack and everything. I'll revise it a little later, I have to right up the revision. Again, sorry about that, I didn't even think about it. As for how he found your office, well he just stumbled upon it by accident while looking for somewhere to hide.
Not annihilated in that sense.. More of the sense that it's kind of ghost-town'ish/abandoned.. the buildings are mostly fine. Maybe a little worse for wear, but... yeah.
I guess I don't blame you for not realizing that Cro was attacked, as it was not described by Hyz/Lucid. ...It was described by Freya/Me. Mostly me. But again that was just my area of the school. Maybe there's still chaos going on in other places. It's up to you.
Did you even read all of the RP posts? xD
So you mean like students aren't as abundant and all, like empty in a sense. Yeah, I can cover an attack in my story. Maybe on my way to find a place to hide I have to battle my way there, like the rest of the school is still battling. I'm going to try and find your posts with the Cro stuff in it so I can continue my post.
I tried to re read every post, but I coudn't do it in one sitting. When I came back to it I couldn't remember where I left off.
Oh.. they're abundant. ..They're just probably dead or unconscious. There's bound to be corpses and things laying about. Blood on the ground.. ice or snow on the walls of the corridors from the attacking and stuff..
I assume you're in a different area than my character was, so just have fun with it. Describe it however you like. Just remember the scene is a bunch of enemy soldiers from who knows where are raiding/invading our school.
I got it, I'm all caught up now, and I'm going to continue, or rather rewrite, my post. I always have fun with it, time to gt this show on the road ;).
Okay, I hope that those changes fixed everything. If not I'll correct everything else later.
Good to see people giving input on posts and showing support. I like feedback and it's always nice to see that people are reading eachothers posts and really taking in what they're writing. Best way to keep us all psyched about it all. Loving what I'm seeing from you guys and what I'm discussing with some of you in PM. Remember, if you have ideas I'm open to them. :)
With that said I'm going to have an ice-cream now because it's hot in Manchester and I'm literally dying. :P
Hyz.
Yeah, I'm glad that Victoria helped me out there, I didn't notice one of her old posts. After I read it I could make the proper changes to my new section. Hopefully you all liked it.
Vicky and I always talk about stuff on MSN, but she's the one who usually makes the most comments about stuff. I'm too nice at times. XDQuote:
Originally Posted by Hyzenthlay
And how hot is hot? It was like 100+ here the other day. And it's just going to get hotter! :p
Our ice cream melts before we even get it home!
I get into my car every day, it says 125
Then it cools off and it says 110. Usual Vegas Summer, no problem.