Yeah I thought you might of missed that bit...
i read your post again and that was really harsh -_-'
Your writing has promise so I didn't want it to seem like I was trying to put you down. In all honesty though I think some ofmy comments were a little uncalled for, especially the part where I said I gave up the will to keep reading, so sorry about that
I didnt think your citique was harsh ^^ Thank you for telling me what i need to work on in the future ^^ Thank you!
