I guess the things that Seiji does will be all the more mysterious then for you. Part of the reason why you probably don't remember a lot about what his power is because he hasn't consciously used his power yet. He has only used a portion of it. So that leaves him with only a couple of things in his favor, though it still makes him powerful without. I can have more feedback with more context.
Thanks. Just being able to log in at my usual spots is one of the few things keeping me sane. I'd seriously lose it if I lost contact with you and everyone else. I'm trying to remember without going back, and all that comes to mind is the scene with the ghost. But I'll keep reading to remember. I'm back to reading at least a chapter a day so I may be able to catch up eventually. And you don't have to give much feedback, just happy you've read what I sent already.
Good that someone was able to anticipate, could have been a lot worse from the sound of it. But it sounds like you got out lucky. I can't imagine how rough that must be for you guys. Hopefully, things improve for you. It's okay to vent. You don't have to worry about me. Yeah, there is a lot of things that I have going on that I don't really explicitly state in the story. I leave some of the weight of things to be discovered by the reader. The important things I'll end up stating clearly so that the story isn't lost. But the smaller things that fill things out or add to it will not always say expressly. I think it helps to give more depth and make the reader work for some of the things. I'm guessing you figured out what Seiji's power is now or still don't know? I'll check it out, but if it is in the middle of the story I'm not going to able to give you a real sense of feedback related to the plot or pacing.
My mother would do most of the anticipating. This lady liked me, or at least pretended to like me until we found out about the bust. At that point she started accusing us of stealing her things and even bluffed one time about calling the cops, but we were smart enough to see through her bluff. It was then when we made our decision to move out and that's exactly what we did within the week. But she looked for me at work about a couple of months back to settle any debts we had. I just hope she doesn't show up again as we don't owe her anything anymore. When I think about it, she should have been arrested too since she and her husband shared the room, and even though she has a heart problem everyone I asked told me that was no excuse to let her go after finding so many guns and drugs in the room. We are all guessing she betrayed her husband by calling the cops on him and possibly my mother. We are doing fine on our own now, but we usually go broke days after pay day. So I've been kinda bummed out. And yeah, perhaps I told you the long version of the story after all but I wanted to let out so much when I typed this. -sigh- I didn't really look at it that way. Had forgotten what Seiji's power was while I can recall what Yumi, Fumiko, and Chiharu are able to do. I just didn't take the time to put two and two together so I never realized just how risky the mission was. I'll PM you a chunk from my latest chapter. My first few chapters were a little on the sloppy side. As for this chapter, I felt a writer's block coming but I managed to push myself before going to bed yesterday and I'm happy to say I amazed myself. You probably won't get much of what's going on but it's still pretty early in the story so it'll be fine, I think
Oh wow, I'm glad you were able to anticipate most of the time. Yeah, Yumi with Yuki is a pretty traditional way things play out. But splitting the group was important. Even those that grouped up was important, because Yumi group doesn't have Yuki or Ayumi that can just heal anything damage that take. So everything has a lot more risk involved and permanence to it. The stakes for them are high, even though I don't state it directly. I'm always really busy, but if you want me to look at something I'll take the time out to give you feedback.
I actually knew the man for many years, it was his new wife we had trouble placing our trust in. And during our stay she made sure my mother suffered, though let's just say my mother would anticipate her moves more often that not. I was expecting Yumi meeting Yuki to go the same way you have portrayed it, actually. Or at least something similar. Not sure what to say about the situation with Yori, though. Too early to say. Oh and if you ever want to read a piece of what I'm working on feel free to ask. I still can't promise how it's gonna go but at least I continue to write a little at a time. I'm close to getting chapter eight done but it's taking me forever. No complaints, though.
Oh wow, I guess there's always a risk when you live with strangers, but don't normally expect something like that to happen. Glad things worked out. Made some headway I see, chapter 135 is getting you into everything.
It is. We moved in with other people back in January and it wasn't until August that the FBI broke into the house. Turns out they had a warrant, and that drugs were being kept at our house. I was at work when it happened and found out when I got home. Met the detective and even got searched. That's just the short version but by the mercy of God my family and I weren't even taken in for questioning. They just let us go. I know you aren't worried. No need to when you know who you're talking to, right? Just reached Chapter 135 so I stopped for the time being, but could resume later or tonight.
You met with the FBI, sounds pretty serious. It really does sound like a lot of things happened to you while you were away. I don't doubt you will get caught up in time. You'll find the time when you can. I'm not worried about it.
Meh, lately I just avoid streaming anything. Met with the FBI face-to-face back in August (not my fault) and since copyright laws exist and all I just decide to play it safe since a lot of things are technically illegal. So I avoid soundtracks unless it's the official Youtube channel and anime sites unless it's Viz or crunchyroll. It's a decision I'm okay with, though I will miss out on a few things x.x And before you say anything I do realize I sound like a prude. But I also figured I'd show my support for my favorite anime by buying something from them. A former co-worker even agreed with me on the issue, though she totally hates my guts now. So much happened to me this past year that made me make the choices I do today, even if a lot of them seem so minimal x3 100 chapters? Well I got this far, didn't I? I can handle 100 more and however many you will write after that. It might take longer but I'm gonna try to see it to the end. I recycle names from stories that haven't worked out so well so if you have read anything from me you might spot a few things. But I'm also coming up with different names as well as names for attacks. Not a lot has come up for the latter but there's still time before major fights break out. Lots of things have been planned but I really have to push myself each time to continue.
A lot of the soundtracks tend not to be available outside of Japan or just hard to locate. It is why we have youtube. >.> I'll be here whenever you want to talk about it. I'm writing chapter 227 tonight, so you still have 100 chapters to catch up. Though Yori's rescue has been resolved, but when you're at 127 that's still the start of the rescue. Quite a bit of stuff happens in the last 100 chapters. Depending on the type of names you needing, I use sites with baby names or general name sites so I can see a bunch and find the one that I feel is right. Might help. But making your own characters is a lot easier to write for than trying to use existing ones. Keep at it.
That's one song I won't forget, especially since I hear the soundtrack hasn't been released outside of Japan. And I won't worry as long as you're around so I can talk about Shift, at least during the pivotal scenes. As far as I know, Yumi and her group are on their way to rescue her brother Yori. Been curious how that would turn out for the longest time, so I might find out on my nights off pretty soon. My current story will be about time traveling with characters and worlds I made up on my own. It's been easy so far because I would create characters ever since I was around 14. Naming them can prove to be difficult, but I look up star names from time to time especially since I intend to involve the Zodiac as well. So much i wish I could just blurt out but I'll let the writing do that for me
Yeah if you're at the Sun King and Black Knight then you're at the end. It is a really great fight and you even get the Battlefield of Flowers playing throughout it making it even more epic. Just take things one at a time, after you finish WKC2 you can finish Ni no Kuni. Glad to hear you're keeping your work on your story. Don't worry about Shift, you don't have to force yourself. Take time when you need it.
Aw, thanks. Just reading that from ya puts a smile on my face. *ahem* Yeah, I continued onward and faced both the Sun King and the Black Knight and I could just feel the end coming. I lost the fight but I can continue when I can set time aside since, as I mentioned, I got many things going on and not enough time to thoroughly enjoy each one. Haven't even cracked Ni No Kuni open for about a week now since I keep putting it off. Not to mention being on the latest chapter of my new story and still trudging through the 127th chapter of Shift. And I keep putting it all off more often than not for my Pokemon obsession, and I haven't even gotten the X & Y version yet. -shudder-
Happy Birthday! I would say you're pretty close. I felt the names of the places since I haven't cracked open WKC2 in a while, but I'm pretty sure you're very close to the end. And Ni no Kuni you're definitely getting near the end when you get Mornstar. I think there is still fair bit left, I think WKC2 is closer to ending than Ni no Kuni.
